@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 318
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Part Two
It was no nowhere in sight. — it says ‘no nowhere’
out you!” My grandpa yelled from the dining room. — ‘My’ = ‘my’
Don’t worry, it get’s worse. — ‘get’s’ = ‘gets’
throwing open it’s doors — ‘it’s’ = ‘its’
My mother want’s me — ‘want’s’ = ‘wants’
need to go home,” Liam eased — period after ‘home’
the door for you,” L…
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
No success. I’ll try it in two parts.
@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Judger. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.Part One
“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘ob…
-
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Um…or two. 😀
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@BethanySinkyRoses Hey! Welcome here. 🙂 My oldest sister’s name is Elizabeth. 😀
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Ergh, it’s not putting out my edited post…I’ll try again in a minute.
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Jugder. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.Part One
“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘obvious’
details,” She said. — ‘she’…
-
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus That is amazingly perfect. Did you color it?
You should put that as the header for Josiah’s video series or something…opening picture in the video, something. 😛 -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
I’ve drunken all of it anyways. You could threaten to melt my desk chair? It’s all right *consolatory pat on your tail* all dragons don’t have to be scary. You’re like the Cowardly Lion of dragons? No, that’s not a compliment at all. Um, you’re like the nice one everyone wants to keep as their friend but still has a healthy fear off in case you…[Read more]
-
Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@ETHRYNDAL WOOOOOT!!! Now YOU’RE a superhero!! *crazy spinning circle* Congratulations. 😀 We all knew it would happen eventually!
*showers of purple glitter* -
Daeus replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl Yes, yes, and yes!
I’d definitely recommend WordPress. Lot’s of pros use WordPress and recommend it. I use WordPress and recommend it. Finally, one or two people on here have moved from something else to WordPress and been very happy that they did. I really don’t think there’s anything you can’t do on WordPress. It’s amazing.
-
Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thank you for the input. I shall see what I can do. *alright words. You are at my command, so why don’t you do something*
@perfectfifths Oh goody! I need picky people. 😛 Thanks for the edits! I need them all!
@rolena-hatfield Hmm…I see what you mean. *note to self for future reference*
@ethryndal Shorty Stories… Ah,…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Mmm…you’re right. But I couldn’t steal ice cream from you. I’m just too nice of a dragon for that. 😛 Besides, my melting things is solely confined to chairs. I’m afraid that I’m not as scary as dragon’s should be. *shuffles off to find some ice cream and to write the last few parts of the sequel.* Just 2 or 3 left! Rejoice everyone!
-
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper – Um, might I point out that, as with some people like me, threatening to steal something from Kate will not affect me. I will not be inspired to be nice by the threat of someone else losing their tiny bottle of Tabasco Sauce… now if you were threatening to confiscate the bowl of ice cream I am currently eating (for real!) I…[Read more]
-
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
*captures each and every butterfly in an invisible net*
The way is clear @dragon-snapper. *sweeping bow* GO WRITE THE NEXT PART! Please. *very humbly said* -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @anne-of-lothlorien Good. Now, if I catch you fighting over something again I shall…steal @kate-flournoy‘s tabasco sauce!
@graciegirl Yes. The butterflies are quite annoying. -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
Poor @f5a8c3e92, only getting the leg. You could at least give her a finger too. 😛
-
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!! I am sharing, I promises. We promises forever. We’s sharing, we is!!!!!!!!!! See?! *frantically makes @graciegirl hold on of the character’s arms while I hold the other and @f5a8c3e92 holds her leg* SEE!
-
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Thank you @daeus. That. Is. Perfect.
-
Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
This

-
Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I think this will work.
- Load More

@Emma-Flournoy AAAAAHHHHH! I KNOW!!! *accidentally runs into you mid spin and we both go tumbling to the floor* I keep fluctuating between “THIS IS SO NEAT!” and “Whoa. Is this real?” I nearly choked when I read it. *GLITTER* *MORE GLITTER* *DROWNS THE ROOM IN GLITTER* Woot!
*tries her best not to look sappy* Aww, you’re so sweet. 🙂
*sits up happily in sea of glitter* Yeah, that’s what I felt like when I saw mine. 😀
DAH, I’m so glad you got on KP and all the STUFFS SARAH. *flails* What I might have missed. God is too amazing for my tiny brain to comprehend.
*dumps more glitter on your head and jumps in with you* WE CAN BE SUPERHEROES TOGETHER!!! Now I just need to hunt down whoever said it and bestow Elven blessings upon them. Because honestly, that was so nice of them. I can’t get over it. I posted an activity comment about it, but really, who’s going to answer that? (And for some reason, whenever I…[Read more]
You know you’re not being at all subtle, child.
*sigh* Because it would be dishonest otherwise…I’ll tell you. I answered your comment, at any rate. 😛 And I just went hunting for what I said, in my posting history, and it wasn’t there either. So…I’ll try to remember what I said, how I said it then. Here’s basically how I answered your…[Read more]
*scratches head over what she was supposed to be subtle about* Maybe I missed something…
Aww, it was you? Awww… *melts into dumb grinning* That’s so sweet! I kind of thought maybe, but when you posted that message, it DID deflect suspicion. So you can continue to cackle gleefully. I almost feel bad about blowing your cover now…
*pauses*…[Read more]
@Ethryndal I’m sorry. 😀 I thought you were hinting there that I’d done it—hinting ever so subtly. I beg your pardon.
Naw, it’s just fine. *grins dumbly with you* Anyway, if you suspected but didn’t tell me so, that would’ve been worse; worse than me knowing straight out you thought it was me. I appreciate frankness. XD I do feel quite proud…[Read more]
@Emma-Flournoy OH. Now I get it. Sorry, I had a brain dead moment. It happens to me occasionally.
Yeah, them poor athiests. They just need to read God’s Smuggler. *launches into insane cackling and rubbing of hands* That ought to fix ’em. 😀
@Ethryndal Eh, happens to everyone. 😀
Them POOR little dears. (Sobbin’ buckets of tears.)
Great, now I’m going to be humming Sobbin’ Women the rest of the day.
@Ethryndal *careless shrug* It happens. 😀