@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, you’re doing and have done great. Just last I checked you were having problems with the plot, and that’s the one thing that really hangs me up when I struggle with that.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 quick tip: look at your different character motivations. Each character is the hero of his or her own story. What are they aiming for? What is it they want? Kara’s not going to be the only one moving the plot. Each person’s life is an entire story. You chose to tell those stories through Kara’s eyes, but they’re still separate…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl I’m coming back now because of @jane-maree‘s comment. Blogger seems to be a good option from what I hear, but I know there was someone on here a while ago who switched from Blogger to WordPress and was very happy they made the decision.
The two examples Jane showed were nice sites, but most Blogger sites I see don’t look as good as…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I will tag @audrey-caylin for another opinion on Blogger (and blogging in general). Just to make things confusing. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer-Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper The more I think about it, I realize that this sums up my blog perfectly. XD
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus *screams and hides in piles of gold*
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Ethryndal replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl Okay. Sounds like you want to start a blog for personal reasons, not just platform building. I actually know something about that! Shocker. Can we take a moment to be amazed by this monumental…moment?
*takes a moment* Anyway. For #1, I say yes. This is one of the reasons I started blogging. I too was having problems with disciplined…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy Ha, yes! When we finished BotFA a few days ago, one of my first thoughts when we came to the funeral scene was, “Emma lied to me!” and a profound feeling of betrayal. Peter Jackson, I’m sorry for casting aspersions on your character. I was led astray. 😉
*blissfully grins with you* It makes me incredibly happy too. He needed it.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Yeah, I’m a weird ‘I’. =P
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
That’s all right The Impossible Girl. And yes, I suppose you can have some hair. Six strands all right?
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea I was surprised when Hope told me you put it on facebook and that you were an ‘I’. I’m an ‘E’ and I’d never had the courage to post a picture like that that someone did of me for the public to see.
‘Kay, so now who wants to draw King Daeus with his raspberry ice cream? @ethryndal?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea May I also say I am soooooo glad you made it your profile 😉 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndel YOU DID IT! 😀 I hoped someone would, I knew I couldn’t have pulled it off so amazingly awesomely epic! 😀 😀 It does look like @aratrea but like he said, it also looks Russian author! And I love the frog 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@emma-flournoy No. @ethryndal drew it and I just applied effects.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses Seen you around the site some already, but welcome! 🙂 What sort of stuff do you like to write?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose I’m really glad it’s helpful. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@ETHRYNDAL remember I wailed on this thread that Thorin didn’t have the Arkenstone with him in the funeral-ish scene? On page 3. But we finished watching BotFA a little bit ago, and HE DID HAVE IT! It was on him; he was sort of holding it. Peter Jackson, I apologize for yelling about that. I was wrong. It was THERE INDEED! This makes me so…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Aha, there we go.
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