Mark Kamibaya

I’m signing out now, all people. I wrote 161 words to the Legend of King Daeus, which I’m now calling LKD, 😛 and finished editing my book. Thanks everyone!
@winter-rose Yep, the short story I recently posted.

@that_writer_girl_99 I second A Tale of Two Cities and Les Mis. Also (more than any other classic ever) The Count of Monte Cristo. After that: Ben Hur, The Scarlet Letter, Crime and Punishment, The Ball and the Cross. (Let me know if you want more.)

@That_Writer_Girl_99 A Tale of Two Cities, A Christmas Carol, (both Dickens) North and South, (Elizabeth Gaskell) Northanger Abbey, (Jane Austen) and Les Miserables (Victor Hugo).

@graciegirl lol! You probably picked one of the hardest books in the world to analyze for story structure. First of all, it doesn’t follow a standard arc, and second, there are so many major events it’s hard not to get confused as to which ones are the major ones.

It’s been a couple years since I’ve read this, so I can’t comment much, but I think…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Woot!

@winter-rose Well, I was working on editing my novel, but I finished editing the entire 1st draft, so yay!!!!! Then, I edited the short story for the contest (which I am open for critiquing if you want) Now, it seems that there is a very high demand for the Legend of King Daeus. Now that I’m not editing as much, I’ll work on that as soon as…[Read more]

@winter-rose Welcome!

@That_Writer_Girl_99 aha, that dear old ugly monster of perfectionism. I’m still struggling with that too, but I am learning that it’s okay to fail. It’s when I let that failure keep me down and cloud my heart towards God that things become a problem.

@daeus @graciegirl @ethryndal @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @jess @all of you

Yes! I finished editing the first draft of my book!!!!!

@That_Writer_Girl_99 cheer up. Nothing is ever pointless. Our mistakes teach us by elimination. 😉 You know what doesn’t work now; that’s one more step towards what does.

@that_writer_girl_99 I am editing.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 ah— the joys of introversion. 😛 I know what that’s like. Most of the time I prefer being by myself or with my family. Hanging out with friends (unless they’re kindred spirits) can be mentally exhausting.

Better watch out or people are gonna start hiring you to do their portraits! XD

@Ethryndal you are hilarious. :”D

Love it!!!!!!!

@dragon-snapper Woot! Yeesh, thirteen pages…

@delightinlife Well, I’m done. 😀

Okay, I was thinking about the whole part with Reuben, and this is my idea (which is probably terrible): What if Reuben wasn’t bullying the squire? What if the kid had done something wrong, and Reuben was reprimanding him? But to Josiah, who missed the first part of the conversation, it looks like the knight is…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I’m done too. 🙂

@jess Hey, that’s pretty good!

Haha! Very good. 😀