@mark-kamibaya
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@emily-d Pumps fist into the air excitedly because she can’t open the forum quick enought I LOVE TINTIN!! I love it more than Calvin and Hobbes!! I’ve got all the books except for the second one, Tintin in the Congo (its’ pretty hard to get, I think, because Herge was ashamed of it) including the unfinished Alph-Art. Have you seen the movie from…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 3 months ago
@graciegirl Nice job. That looks like a great pairing. When I first read through it, my worry was that answers 2 & 3 and then 1 & 4 both looked kind of similar, but reading through them again, I can see the distinctions you’re drawing there. As long as those distinctions remain clear in your head throughout the book that should work out great!…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Three: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 3 months ago
@graciegirl Yeah–it will get easier the more practice you have at doing this with films and books, but some stories are still tough to analyze in this way!
I haven’t read “The Little White Horse,” so my ability to contribute helpfully here is going to be a bit limited. However, from what you said, it could be that the FQ is something like “What…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic So. *Pops knuckles* Art, anyone? in the forum Art 9 years, 3 months ago
@GraceofSpades2017 sounds like you and @I-J-Anderson would get along splendidly. 😀
Hm. Okayyyyy… I’ve had a few characters drawn, but never a scene. This could be fun. Hmmm… Okayyyy… I’ve got one. Two characters first:
Harold. Nineteen, tall, somewhat lanky, curly/wavy bright gold hair, hard face, flame-blue eyes; very intense and wired…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@dragon-snapper Seems like the story writers had a great idea, but just didn’t execute it very well.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 3 months ago
@ethryndal I’m actually going to post her name, because well, it’s the internet… 😛 But please, feel free to draw her.
I forgot to mention she’s about 15.
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Snapper replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@daeus Pretty much, I agree with everything you said about the characters, except how they got better at the end. Because I couldn’t connect in the first place, it was really hard to do so in the final battle. And actually, I don’t really like the movie either, so yeah…you’re not alone.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus probably because no one else was. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@graciegirl Very well. I can certainly understand forgiving a story. I was really brutal with this one. I don’t know why.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus *chokes* Got it. Point taken. I see what you’re saying. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@kate-flournoy Yes, you’re totally right, but it has nothing to do with yearning. *imagines himself staring attentively at a toad crossing the road*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@Daeus *smirks* Point taken.
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Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@graciegirl 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@kate-flournoy Congratulations on connecting with the characters. I think if I could have connected with them earlier on, I probably could have liked them a lot more.
I’ll only argue on one point. Being hopeless and without a cause has nothing to do with whether a character has yearning. Because Harold. *nods sagely*
Ha! Ok, that’s really funny…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
Oh, and did you notice that the Lies that began both Cassian’s and Jyn’s arc are both passive? For the theme’s sake that was necessary, as they were learning to stand up and do something in the name of hope. That was the whole point.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
*tips her hat to you for taking the unpopular opinion*
@Daeus all fair points. I can see what you’re saying, definitely, and in some measure I agree, but it didn’t prevent me connecting to the characters. I thought it was kind of the point that they were all hopeless rebels without a cause. Though I will admit I was intrigued by them more than I…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@graceofspades2017 Hehe. 🙂 Yes, that’s quite a bit of good input there.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
No worries! 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @dragon-snapper @graciegirl @ethryndal
Ok, I’ve watched Rogue One. I liked it. I hope you’ll forgive me, but for me it was a bit of a mixed bag. I understand this is a dastardly statement, so I’ll try to explain myself.
For me, the movie was clearly divided into two sections. Pre going rogue and post going rogue.…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
The only one at the moment is a typo in the line, “…as the ground feel apart around her.”
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