Mark Kamibaya

@winter-rose Frodo, greetings!
@daughteroftheking
*chases cowardly chairs*

@that_writer_girl_99 *glances at the floor*
*grins*
Heh heh heh.. 🙂
@catwing If the shaking is distracting you, let me know. I’ll melt it. 😛 XD

@daughteroftheking Then my reputation proceeds me. Fear me, all ye KaPeefer chairs!

@catwing @that_writer_Girl_99 @daughteroftheking @winter-rose Let’s see if I can do this without melting any chairs. I’m on.

@aislinn-mollisong Alright, I read the prologue and chapter one. Josiah basically covered everything already. I’ll just see if I can go into a few more details.

First of all, the secret ingredient really is slowing down. I’m going to be more extreme than Josiah here. I would say slow things down four times what it is now, maybe even more for the…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong I only had time to look through the prologue and chapter one, but here’s a couple things I noted:

The prose feels very choppy and is very bare-bones. Try fleshing out your descriptions more and varying the sentence structure for the writing to feel more smooth.

You do a lot of telling as opposed to showing, which is probably…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollislong Yes, that would be fine.

@aislinn-mollisong Well, I can’t read through your whole book unfortunately, but if you could give me a sample scene, I could read through that and see if I can identify the problem.

Praying, everybody.

@Aislinn-Mollisong Yeah, what Jane said. I’ll just clarify that an agent is someone who represents you to different publishing houses. So instead of you convincing a publisher to publish your book, you convince an agent and he convinces the publisher. Generally speaking, having an agent makes you more likely to get accepted by a publisher. My…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Good to know! My to-read list is ridiculously long, but I’ll see if I can fit that somewhere on it. xD

@daeus I’m a fan. YES.

@aislinn-mollisong I’m self-published and know a bit about traditional publishing. Do you have any specific questions?

@Anne-of-Lothlorien I’ll be praying.

@Salome01W4G @EpicAddie2 Yow, I’ll be praying. I haven’t had to move for at least 11 years, but I can imagine how hard it’d be. I don’t really want to experience it any time soon. 😛

Btw @That_Writer_Girl_99, how’d your dad do with his exam?

@Anne-of-Lothorien I’ll be praying.

@Salome01W4G @EpicAddie2 Yow, I’ll be praying. I haven’t had to move for at least 11 years, but I can imagine how hard it’d be. I don’t really want to experience it any time soon. 😛

Btw @That_Writer_Girl_99, how’d your dad do with his exam?

@epicaddie2 Certainly. Sounds like a big change!

@catwing @anyone else I’m signing out now. I wrote about 500 and beta-read a bit.

@catwing *pops in* What? Where? I don’t see her! Aha!
*pulls Dragon Snapper out of the internets*
Stop melting chairs!

@catwing *wobbles and steadies self on imaginary wall* You know. The sequel on page 31 of this topic.

@emily Greetings!