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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
It’s okay, Kylo Ren. Your existence is helping people understand people better, even if they’re not talking about you.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy I think I get you…
So then when I feel terribly sorry or happy for someone, it’s sympathy? Even though the emotion I am experiencing for them is the the same one they are experiencing?
With your example of the kid on the sidewalk (poor little guy!), it looks like you’re saying empathy is primarily for emotions… is that right? So…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
So Kate, is it due to being an empath that I cringe and feel like disabling all my sensors when seeing and hearing all the chopping and slicing in too-graphic battle scenes? (Or even some other, not graphic, things. Like Mike Wasowski slamming himself into a sitting position on a metal bar to make Boo laugh—that part makes me seriously want to…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sherlock Holmes in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic New Game! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Ooooh, this sounds so fun, @ClaireC!
I’m terribly sorry, but I don’t think I have time to participate right now.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Inserting Videos in the forum Questions and Support 9 years, 7 months ago
I’ve put a video on the forum once; I think I just copy-and-pasted the link, and the video popped up. I didn’t specifically mean for it to, but it did.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Your Avatar in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Mine’s sunlight on little white flowers at the edge of the woods.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 7 months ago
I like the second one best. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 9 years, 7 months ago
Wow, @BlueJay, you won second in the competition! Good job.
And is ‘Paperclip Productions’ your ownest company?? Wow.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Rumplestiltskin
The Simpleton
Jack and the Beanstalk
Little Red Riding Hood
St. George and the Dragon (or is that a true story?)
Or are all of those too like childrens’ nursery tales?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 7 months ago
That is hilarious.
I would say what Daeus said on his post about the first poem—the meter/cadence could use some evening out; though I know with a list of words that must be used, there’s only so much you can do for rhyme and cadence.
And also, ‘a yelled of surprise’ is not grammatically correct. 😉That’s really funny. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sherlock Holmes in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
I actually haven’t read any…according to a trusted source (ahem, @Kate-Flournoy), I may not. *shrug* What’s the use, if they’re not AMAZING?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic What Is Your Birthday? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
My birthday is January 11th, and I’m late.
Wait. That wasn’t the punchline.😉
I’m 15.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Shh, It's a surprise birthday party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Anne-Swiftblade, so sorry for being so very terribly late. I was tagged, but I was gone. 🙁
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Emma Flournoy's profile was updated 9 years, 7 months ago
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 7 months ago
Hey people— @BlueJay, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @christi-eaton, @anne-of-lothlorien, and anyone else who may tag me—just wanted to let you know, I’m not ignoring your tags. I’ve seen them, but we’re on vacation, and with not much wi-fi time; so it’ll probably be about a week before I get back to what you tagged me for.
But I’m not ignoring…[Read more]-
@emma-flournoy I have no idea if you’ll see this, but that’s okay. 🙂 Hope you are having a great time away. 😀
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@bluejay We are, thanks. 🙂
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@emma-flournoy WELCOME BACK! I missed you. 🙂
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Aww, thanks @BlueJay. *hugs you*
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Oh, and I’ll be replying to your e-mail sometime soon—hopefully tomorrow or the next day.
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*hugs you too* Oh goody. I look forward to it. 🙂
Hey, I know you don’t 100% write, but you any good with beta reading?
@emma-flournoy
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@bluejay
Yyyyyus…in fact, that’s what I do for Kate’s book. I (since you asked!) do think I’m a pretty good beta-reader; pretty tough, but I think that’s good, for someone really wanting feedback. I’m not trying to brag, you understand… :/Why?
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I have a 15 page story that I’m giving a few people for critiquing and so I thought you might be interested…?
And I understand about not bragging when you are trying to tell someone that you can do it well. 🙂 @emma-flournoy-
*happy nod* (happy that you’d consider me!)
Since it’s not very long I should have time, but I’m gonna ask Mom, and get back with you about it tomorrow. All good?
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That’s fine. 🙂 I’ll wait. And FYI you don’t need to tag me for me to receive and email notification. When we post here, it just let’s me know. But let’s make sure. I’m not going to tag you, do you get a notification…?
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Huh. That’s helpful. I did not know that. (Obviously.)
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I think it is something to do with the fact that we are under your profile. So maybe it is linking that with your email. I don’t know. But there you have it folks… 🙂
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Good to know. 🙂
Okay, Mom said that’s fine, so you can e-mail me the document I guess, and I’ll ask you more about the beta-reading in replying to the e-mail.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Me too, @Jess. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, that’s @BlueJay ‘s name! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Remember: Premise is what makes the readers pick up the book. Plot is what keeps them reading. Character is what makes them pick up the book a second time. And for the record I find that I always remember the characters most.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Gotcha @Jess.
I’m thinking that instead of the typical overthrow, they reconcile in some exciting, entertaining way.
That is an extremely creative idea! That could be so good; I can’t recall having seen it in a story before.And I 200% agree with your philosophy for dealing with your ideas already being taken—‘Well, I’ll just have to make min…[Read more]
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