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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Alrighty!
Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I found Jim’s. I also have seen Jonathan, 314, and two people I have yet to meet: Amber and Michael.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?
And Jim too?
…but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I have finished The Color of Hope and quite enjoyed it. I’ve been quite busy with work lately, and am going on vacation right away. I will get to answering your feedback questions when I get back!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
All right, sounds good. I have made it to Chapter 10 so far today. I may read more later if I have time.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That works! I’m in. Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey Ellette, I just tried clicking on the link to the Microsoft Word document that you posted early on in this forum, but it told me I didn’t have permission. Is that the correct link? I can email you my Microsoft Email address if you need it so you can add me in.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I don’t know if you saw it or not, but I am back! I will try to get to reading and critiquing part three of The Color of Hope tommorow!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 2 months ago
I have played with the idea in the back of my mind of putting my programming skills to use and making another website similar to Kingdom Pen.
There are some things to consider though:
1. Websites cost money. Someone is going to have to pay for hosting and the domain name for this website.
2. We would need to find moderators for…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keliah-h @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium
Hello everyone! I’m back!
An update regarding my writing. I was reflecting on the things I write. My goal in my writing is first and foremost to glorify God. But I’ve realized I have let the fantasy side of my writing become an idol to me. I admit I…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium
Hey everyone! I’m just letting you all know, I’m going to be taking a break from Kingdom Pen. I’ve been spending a lot of time on my laptop for a while and I think I need to unplug a bit for my mental and spiritual health and go do something outside.…[Read more]
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Congratulations on finishing your draft! Have a great summer!
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Thank you!
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See ya around!
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See you later, have a nice summer!
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Have a good summer! See ya around!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Time to take this back to art
@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper
Updated artwork of Cryus! This still needs to be cleaned up, and I may add in a bit of a background, but here it is right now:
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay, thank you!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
All right! Thank you for the feedback! This is helpful!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
That’s a good point with The Chosen One
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
It’s whatever shape it needs to be? Maybe they can force it to be flat when they want it to.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you!
It’s flat, based off of Orange’s dream where Blue and Green use him as a basket ball hoop. They also compared his head to this in the Group Chat acctual short
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Alan Becker Fans in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
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@linus-smallprint
HI!!! I was so shocked when I got a notification from you. haha! Glad to have you back!
I can totally see where you are coming from and I actually respect it. Though I’m eager to see what happens with Alan and the gang, I totally understand.
Anyhow, glad to have you back!
Let me know if you ever have time for some…[Read more]
@ellette-giselle
Thank you for understanding! I will try to get to checking out your Mission Impossible tomorrow!
@linus-smallprint
Oh that would be great! Thanks you!
Glad to see you’re back! I know I wasn’t reading your project, but I understand where you’re coming from. Feel free to take as much time as you need, and if you don’t want to finish TCoH right now, that’s totally fine. I don’t want to be a stumbling block to you or anyone else, so please know if you need to take time away from that as well, I com…[Read more]
Don’t worry, I will return to reading TCoH. The thing that was causing me to stumble is something that usually only appears in fantasy books. Science fiction is the only other genre I know of it could appear in. Your book is fine. There was nothing of that sort in it, so I will pick it up again and continue reading.
Glad to hear! Looking forward to reading your feedback!
Hi! I’m glad you’re back! Though when I saw your name in my email, I thought you’d created a topic for Book 3. 😢 But I understand why you need to take a break from it. Anyway, welcome back!!!
Thank you for the welcome!
Sorry to disappoint you, and thank you for understanding.