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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Your drawing looks good, although I do find the bright pupils odd. Is this because he isn’t human?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @power @elishavet-pidyon
Thank you for ze complements to ze wuffers. I must confess though, I did follow a tutorial directly for the outline.
You can draw your own wuffers here: https://monikazagrobelna.com/2019/07/26/sketchbook-original-how-to-draw-wolves/
Oh nice!! Watercolor pencils? Are you going to brush them? (It…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost – Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Did you send the request? I haven’t got anything yet.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost – Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
All right. Get better soon!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Nice. Now if you see one of those, keep your distance.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost – Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Sounds good. Thank you!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost – Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Google Docs (for people who are still cool but prefer more well known cloud services):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1baUTc9Fi6INSrDnDlY9GUjtPF5XuP7vtF5R6vCAx-jg/edit?usp=sharing
(You will need to request access for this document. Shoot me a message here on Kingdom Pen so I know it is you who is trying to get in and not some stranger.)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost – Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I guess it would be useful to actually post the chapters, eh?
Proton (for cool people who like secure file sharing platforms): https://drive.proton.me/urls/MAX6FG5XQW#5mvXQzZvqRKb
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 3 weeks ago

My sister got me some nice watercolour pencils for Christmas!
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Linus Smallprint started the topic TNPT Book I: The Cost – Draft 3 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
In the world of Ehverwyld, magic is an evil thing. It twists those who use into horrible crow-like monsters. Alan knows this. It took his family and has left its mark on him. Alan deeply regrets the day he used it.
But it isn’t the end for Alan yet. He’s determined to put his past behind him, by joining his country’s army. He will prove to the w…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months, 1 week ago
Sorry, I’ve been gone a while. But I’m back now. Anything more updates on the moderators?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 3 weeks ago
That’s quite the story about your friend. Yikes!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 3 weeks ago
I guarantee someone has picked up Chronicles of Narnia and made the argument it supports Satanism.
Yup. Some people who attend my church fell into the Occult before they became Christians, and they blame it on Narnia. Which is a bit challenging for me as a fantasy writer. I am just careful to respect their convictions and not wave my…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Looking through everyone else’s responses, I think they have already covered what I would say to that. Have her enjoy it, because it’s realistic, then show some consequences. I like the idea of starting with subtle consequences. Something that lets the reader know that what she did was wrong, but she would push it away, or even tell…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months, 4 weeks ago
My sister does not have an account. I will see if she is willing to try again. Thanks for the heads-up!
Should we try contacting the moderators again?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Good drawing! The lighting turned out well!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Sorry it took me a while to reply. I’ve been neglecting KingdomPen (and some other things), as of late. Trying to get back into it.
Your drawing does look good! The hair does look like it is caught up in the wind. The scarf looks a little stiff, though. I might expect it to bulge a little with the wind. Other than that, it’s a good, clean drawing!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
600+? That’s… a lot of characters… You’ve got a lot of patience.
How long did it take you to do just those 28?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Sorry, it took me a while to get to that thing, but I finally did!
What you’ve got looks all right. You’re setting up a war and a villain within their own ranks. The prologue does make this more interesting with the old warrior who doesn’t want to be a hero contrasted with his younger self, who is far more eager to fight. Keep it…[Read more]
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