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@mineralizedwritings

Yeah! One time I went through a solve of a Square-1 with some help. It was last year when I attended 5 weeks at MathCamp for the summer, and a bunch of other campers had cubes, so we made a club. One Had a couple Sqr-1’s and gave us all a lesson, it was really cool! It really messes with your intuition where there’s a turn…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, he’s a nobleman, but I haven’t found out for sure yet what’s really wrong with him

@princesachronicle22

Ok, cool! Sad, but cool! Do you think the husband was influenced by the not kings influence over the actual king?

@thearcaneaxiom

Well exactly that but how the mother was able to run away from him and raise her children in a safer enviornment

@princesachronicle22

That’s terrible. What were you dreaming last night????

@thearcaneaxiom

Well it’s one of the main character’s mother. And she lives with a not only abusive but psychotic husband, because I’m a terrible person

@princesachronicle22

is it something the not king is doing to her? Or is it something else?

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, it’s that one

The prolouge was just inspired by my dream, but writing it now I feel so awful for this lady XD

@princesachronicle22

Ah, yes, of course. So it’s after the pillars and the glow and stuff. So this is with the false king then?

@thearcaneaxiom

No, Zyrin is the one before this one. The prequel to this prequel, ooobbbviously XD

@princesachronicle22

Cool! So is this with Ziren then?

@thearcaneaxiom

Nope this is the one before Viscount. Currently I’m calling it The Darling Theif, but I’m not set on that yet

@freedomwriter76

Yes… she’s growing… by watching her children suffer… I-I

*sobs quietly in corner*

@princesachronicle22

Ohhh! Is this for Viscount? What are you doing to her in the torture chamber that is a book page?

Okay I just barely started writing a prolouge for one of my books, and it was inspired by a dream last night but writing it right now I feel so evil, this poor woman can’t escape me XD

@freedomwriter76

Awwwww…thanks!!!! 💕💕💕💕 I felt pretty confident, but it’s always good to get second opinions. 😉

Now, to nail down Tony’s internal conflict…

XD yeah, I’m sure you’ll do great!

Alex is my creation, so she’s not hard, lol!

Yes, that does make things easier! Though sometimes I have no idea what to do with the minds of my charrie’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I think these look great! The first thing I would say when it comes to this stuff is think about how consistent does this fit with the narrative of the cannon series, the issue with that however, is that the cannon isn’t even consistent with itself. That being said, I think you did well on this with both characters. Steve was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter67

I think you nailed them pretty well!!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, the Castle is actually really cool. My logical brain pesters me about the contradictions, and how the lore doesn’t quite work in any cannon sense, but that’s not the point. I really struggle with characters, I can make them struggle, and that’s a big part, but that’s still a small piece of who they are as an individual. The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah that’s how I feel about the Castle! It’s been really good for my character development and writing (: