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Oh… gifs don’t work…

XDD

@jonas

Yeeah

Don’t even ask about the time. Idk why it looks like that XDD

Though that’s not “smashing” the record, do we think we can do better?

Most users ever online was 13 on December 22, 2023 9:52 pm

Yeah, we did it by one person!

Almost there guyssss

@savannah_grace2009

I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…

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Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎

@acancello

You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.

Half an hour!

@mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, that’s something I easily forget about. Thanks for reminding me! I’ll definitely keep that in mind as I write and edit. 😊

@mineralizedwritings Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I just wanna give Lois a hug…

I think Lois would be good at giving hugs

Dante

One corner of Dante’s mouth twitched upwards into a half smile. As much as he wanted to, he did not get this kid. The others were easy. Cal wanted to learn, and he was loyal to Princess Kate and whatever country it was that they came from. Hugo was fri…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whaaat? I would never.  *Hides plot idea notes*

@savannah_grace2009

Alrighty! Here we go!

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Um, I wouldn’t say it’s boring. I think the pacing is pretty good. Honestly, boring is so subjective, so no, it’s not boring. Because I don’t mind things moving a little slower at the beginning. Some people m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yep!

Awesome!

Ev is obviously pretty reckless. He doesn’t seem to care about getting into danger, and I’m not really sure to describe his personality but he seems playful?

And Ami is sweet and responsible. She really cares about Ev and wants to protect him.

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@rae

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.

Alrighty, awesome! 👍

I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write…

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