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@freedomwriter76

I think these look great! The first thing I would say when it comes to this stuff is think about how consistent does this fit with the narrative of the cannon series, the issue with that however, is that the cannon isn’t even consistent with itself. That being said, I think you did well on this with both characters. Steve was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter67

I think you nailed them pretty well!!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, the Castle is actually really cool. My logical brain pesters me about the contradictions, and how the lore doesn’t quite work in any cannon sense, but that’s not the point. I really struggle with characters, I can make them struggle, and that’s a big part, but that’s still a small piece of who they are as an individual. The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah that’s how I feel about the Castle! It’s been really good for my character development and writing (:

@freedomwriter76

Yep…I’ve felt like that too many times to count. 😂😂😂 I think that’s why I started writing fanfictions even more…they’re great for practicing writing and they get you writing without making you stress so much. 😊

Yeah, stress is a big thing when it comes to writing. If your doing it just because you feel like you have to, then you’…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes your very thorough, but that doesn’t mean we have everything figured out XD

I’m just trying to over dramatize thank you very much! It’s my writers right

@freedomwriter67

Yeah, I get that! I adore writing and doing at for it but even I get tired of it at times, I can’t wait for my book to be finished and to try and self…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Lol, okay, fair…😂😂😂…but some of it is done for me…I’m just…changing things…😜

True. I guess that’s probably the biggest advantage to fanfiction. A base templet has been provided, so now you can dedicated your energy more into the story instead.

@freedomwriter76

Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️ It seems like a lot of fun…I just don’t have the patience. 😆😆😆

Say’s the one writing 4 books worth of fanfiction😆

@princesachronicle22

What contradictions? Very incomplete yes, but I’m thorough in making sure there isn’t anything that contradicts anything else.

@freedomwriter76

Yes, we simply have to divert your attention away from the millions of plot holes and self contradictions that ruin it XD

But thanks!! I love worldbuilding C:

@freedomwriter76

Well, I’m sure you’ll find something that fits perfectly into your model!!! 😊

Yeah, it will come to me and/or Princess eventually.

Y’all’s worldbuilding is absolutely A M A Z I N G !!!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

You make me blush:)

@esther-c

See ya!

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c.

Hmmm…I was thinking (maybe…) someone can merely look at the stone and it will break??? Just a thought that came into my mind. 😂

Yeah, what’s interesting about that is that it does correlate to the particular model we’re doing. It could be rationalized, but I’m still not sure, it still feels a little too much like the…[Read more]

@esther-c

Bye!!!!

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom

I know it’s only been a little bit, but I have to skidaddle now. Nice talking!! See ya later!! 😀

@esther-c

Yes totally!!!

@freedomwriter67

So true!

@freedomwriter76

That’s so sweet of you to do that for your mom! 🥰🥰🥰

Thx!! 🙂

@princesachronicle22

XD yes, in reality he usually does listen, but how often he registers what I’ve said… XD

Lol XD

@freedomwriter76 @thearcaneaxiom

Hmmm…I was thinking (maybe…) someone can merely look at the stone and it will break??? Just a thought that came into my mind. 😂

I was kinda thinkin’ the same thing. 😂

@princesachronicle22

Okay! Well I hope any changes that occur go well for you (:

Thank you!! There’s a lot of prayer involved and a lot of trusting God. But isn’t that the exciting part about being a follower of God? When you don’t see what’s next, He does, and we get to be a part of His awesome plan for our lives and the lives of those around…[Read more]