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I’m not sure who to tag, so I’m just going to post this and hope people see it. 😅

So I’m struggling with the beginning and the ending of my story. I’ll talk about the beginning here and the end in a different post.

M’kay. I’m trying to hook my readers from the get-go, but I’m not sure if that’s exactly happening. I’ve heard multiple opinions…[Read more]

@rae

Thank youuuu, my brain is a little dead for some reason so I actually couldn’t think of that many tags. XDD

@savannah_grace2009

Lol, I just don’t want people to see my first draft stuff. That’s all. XD

It’s totally fine if you share your writing with everyone, especially if they’re giving you some good feedback. (:

And Imma tag as many people as I can think of XD

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @landric @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @okmaybeican’tthinkofthatmanypeoplewelp

@y’all

I’m finally hereeee

I was at church.

Oki. I’m EST. And I don’t really have a specific time that would work best for me, since this week is Christmas break. Typically the afternoon works, but idk for sure. Just pick a time and I’ll see what I can do

@rae

Ah, sharing your writing with your family. This is an ongoing joke in our household. Mom and Dad have only read a couple short stories I’ve written, even though I claim to be writing a few books. So every time the topic of writing comes up, it’s like, “If she actually writes…” 😂

I personally just don’t like sharing something with non-wr…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

“And if we really hate it, we can just leave,” Liv added.

Lukas chuckled. “Very true.”

He let his eyes roam the room as their conversation fell into a lull. He noticed Chase sitting against the wall and Callista glance back at him. Callie was smiling, but fresh tears sparkled in her eyes. Fynn seemed to be worried…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Yeah, me too.” Liv sighed. “But we can try, right?”

Lukas took a deep breath. “Yeah… You know what, it’ll be great.” He flashed a confident smile. “And if it’s not, then we’ll have to make ourselves enjoy it. Make it fun. Deal?”

@rae

Callista

“Callie, I don’t want to hurt you.” Chase’s voice was but a whisper. His gaze dropped to the floor again.“I guess I’m no different than my father.”

Callista didn’t know what to do, or say, or even think at this point. The mercy overflowing in her heart spilled out in the form of silent, silver tears. She met his eyes and didn’t…[Read more]

Chaseeee 😭

I’d RP now, but I can’t. I’ll try to get it done later.

@smiley

Ok, awesome. I don’t have time to RP that rn, but you can first if you want. (:

@calyhuge @freedomwriter76

Um… what happened to our group? Cuz if we aren’t doing anything with them, I think I’m going to bring that charrie to the dance practice… XD

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

“Okay, maybe this was a bad idea,” Liv said, walking up to Lukas. “I’m terrified.”

Lukas let out a nervous laugh. “You’re not the only one.” His eyes darted around the room, trying to avoid eye contact with anyone, especially Liv. “Fynn told me to relax, but I don’t think I’m succeeding.” He gave her a lopsided smi…[Read more]

I do actually have characters who love dancing, but, for some reason, none of them are in this rp

@whalekeeper

Lois 
Lois smiled softly.
“Well… no, not really. I’ve tried some swing, but that was years ago. I’m sure I’d trip all over myself if I tried now. Our home hasn’t had much heart for dancing lately.   …Have you two danced before?”

@calyhuge @whalekeeper

Ugh I hope I’m not misinterpreting Hugo’s question again this time

Dante 

Dante watched Sebastian clomp into the dance room, a bit bewildered by his sudden change in mood. Usually Dante was the chaotic one, but Seb easily outdid him there.

He wondered why he had decided to spend his afternoon at dance practice of all t…[Read more]

HELP!!!!!!!

MY IDENTITY IS BEING STOLEN!!!!!!!

lol

your romance is actually very good. Very accurate to real life. Wishing I had your “mad skills” as my pastor would say

Why thank you, Rae. 🙂

@whalekeeper

If you most distinguished writers will grant me the pleasure, I can write a transition scene for our quartet.

Go ahead!

Like Rae said, you’re doing pretty well for a first romantic scene XD

thanks!