Madelyn

@loopylin now how did I forget to tag Whaley *virtual facepalm*

@hybridlore @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin

Here’s another scene! This is one I started in a previous draft and finished just recently. Again no critiques please! Not ready for that lol

November’s foot tapped against the marble flooring. His lips quirked to the side and he cleared his throat, glancing f…

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@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!

Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?

But ya callan sucks

And if she was there (she does later have a confrontation with her, Callan and November) she isn’t at that place in her character to fight back );

@loopylin sadly no XD

@loopylin awww thx!! I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD

@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…

ANYWAYYY if u want to read the scenes I’ve got…it’s November scenes… (good luck gang…don’t hate me XD)

here’s the first one! (btw I’m not looking for critiques. this is a draft and idk how the writing is honestly…im not super happy but im just getting words down.)

And its not super linear cuz Im not doing Ara’s…[Read more]

tag didn’t work XD I did it wrong…. @freed_and_redeemed

@freed-and-redeemed I FINALLY GET TO RESPONDDD!!

While im not totally pleased that the others are on the back burner I know its k cuz they’re you’re babies so you’ll get back to it (; just like me with my WIP!

BUT I HAD TO SAY…THAT MY WRITER WHO WRITES THESE AWESOME CHARACTERS THAT ARE NOW MY BABIES CUZ I HAVE STOLEN THEM XD IS GOING TO…[Read more]

@koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)

I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little…[Read more]

@koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)

The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…

The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of…[Read more]

@hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD

@keilah0h popping on to say IT’S PRONOUNCED KAY-LUH….

*Insert embarrassed emoji….ducks back underground muttering to self. Falls and bangs into ground*

This was the logline I’d wrote for it too!

A Peter Pan retelling in a steampunk YA setting, about a boy who must learn that life is worth living despite the battles.

Of course, as my books always do, there’s a theme that deals with inner/mental struggles and battles. I have my own mental struggles and family members/friends who have the same,…[Read more]

ANYWAY!

Here is was my (I think? XD) Newest Blurb or at least one of the newest blurbs when I left this WIP

When Peter Barrie’s homeland, Everlin is taken over by a ruthless dictator, his life is turned upside down. When his parents are taken captive by the dictator, due to their father being an inventor, Peter and his little sister, Bell, are t…

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@loopylin NOT YOU TOO!!! NO…STOP!!! MY BRAIN CAN’T BRAIN THIS….