Lydibug

@thearcaneaxiom @linus-smallprint (if you have thoughts)

Shifting this discussion is best, so we don’t flood the book review XD

Indeed we do have very different theological and cosmological prospectives. It just bugs me that that needs to be where the identity of us as Christians must be. Yes, theology is important, but what did Christ constantly…

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Hopefully that helps you estimate length :] Thinks like hair color and eye color only need one sentence unless they’re important. Same with clothes and body type.

If you need to summarize a character super quickly, pick the most important details and put in a few sentences, like this:

Marcel is a young superhero with a heart of gold. With…[Read more]

Okay. So usually I have a detailed bio for a character, but can still condense it into a small section if I ever need to share it with someone, summarize an intro in my outline, etc.

I just go with this, as an example, with a known MC of mine.

Name: Marcel, Mars (nickname), Waltman (last name in office records but isn’t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Please, share an example of one of your sheets!

I’ll pull up one of my sheets and see if I can find how I condense it. Brb.

@rae

Dante

“Huh.” A lab experiment. The whole no needles rule was starting to make sense now.

Dante stopped walking in the middle of the parking lot and spun in a slow circle. He was scanning the buildings surrounding them, looking for the right one. He paused, looking in the direction of the school.

“Of course,” he muttered. It was the tal…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I have not read the book, but my mum listened to it on audio and enjoyed it 😆 She said it was cozy and a whole lot less complicated than Sanderson’s other works. She also tends to doze off while listening (she’s sick and has a terrible sleep schedule) but understood enough to give it a positive review, lol.

To this day she say…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Why deny our relationship with Christ😥

I don’t mean to start a discussion on this thread, and we can move it if it goes any further 🙃 I do believe at least from a reformed perspective – and other people probably agree with me – that the Church of the Latter-Day Saints is not what we define as Christianity.

Those in the L…[Read more]

@theducktator

lol yes

Your character does actually kinda sound like a younger version of me except I’m taller:P

Anyway, glad you found a good name for her!

@rae

Dante

“Teinin. What about you? You’re not human, are you?”

Funnn

*subscribed*

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… maybe you could bring Riker to a point where he starts playing what-if scenarios in his head. Like “What if God does really love me?” “What if I can actually be forgiven?” Etc. to where he eventually starts believing it. I’m sure he’ll fight it at first, but then he just finally…[Read more]

@beth-torres

(I’m finally getting back to you within a few days!! 😱😂)

Ok, awesome!

Hallie

Hallie blinked a few times, the awkwardness of the moment sinking in. Her cheeks burned as she took a step back. “Oh, I guess… Well… um, thanks?” She forced a chuckle. Top hat? She mentally scrambled for something else to say, but nothing came to mind.…[Read more]

#thisrphasturnedDanteintoaklepto

#IhavenothingtosayIjustwanttodothehashtagthingtoo

@rae

Dante

“…Huh. Weird.”

Dante gave Alpha a look and scooped the money into his pocket. Then he lifted up the mattress.

“Ah, there it is.” He pulled out a small, odd looking radio with far too many switches and dials. He stuffed this in his pocket as well and turned to walk to the door. He patted Alpha on the arm as he walked past.…[Read more]

#howtoindirectlytellsomeonetheyseemcool

@loopylin

I actually swiftly painted a canvas this afternoon at a birthday party, and plan to make paper wings to glue to it. If I burn or paint the edges a darker color, it should look pretty 😛

Marz

“I have to guess you’re talking to the dragon,” Marcel said. “But whatever you find cool, thanks.”

He picked up the purple bear and walked it…[Read more]

@rae

Dante

“Oh. It’s nothing, don’t worry about it. I just wasn’t expecting to stay here this long. Speaking of, I was just swinging by to grab a couple things…”

He went to his bed and began moving things around, looking. He paused after lifting up his pillow.

“Um. Alpha? Is there a reason you put all this money here?”

@stephie

Sooo… I feel really bad because I never was able to read the book 🫣 I really wanted to I just totally forgot/didn’t get the time!! 😭

I have a basic idea of what the book’s about though, so I’m looking forward to reading y’all’s discussions!

@whalekeeper Yes, I absolutely did. XD Rip all those abandoned hobbies of mine

Ells

Ellie giggled. She carefully took the paper dragon off her head and set it down next to her own creation, a small bear made with lavender paper. She gave the dragon a little boop on the nose.

“Wow,” she breathed. “You’re really cool.…[Read more]