-
Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed
Ooh, I understand. M’kay, so I cannot write a book without a dual POV, lol, I think it’s impossible for me at this point. XD
When I first started writing from a dual POV, I gave each POV a chapter, but as I starting writing better stories, I noticed that I was adding unnecessary stuff to the chapters, just to make them lon…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
Lol my bad, I’m not correcting you! I’m saying a character can have an aura of seriousness and be hiding something, like you said, but they can also be completely honest if the author wants to go in that route. It’s really up to the person.
-
whaley replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 1 month ago
This might be more of a side thread, but it also helps to know how aware the character is of their own seriousness, and how aware they allow others to be when that seriousness pops up.
For example, the chewing-lip-denial @rae just mentioned suggests the character doesn’t know they are expressive in the first place, or it suggests the character…[Read more]
-
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
oh I forgot he also has pointy ears. This would be so much easier with pictures.
Liko
“Yep. All mine.” Liko grinned. He was propping himself up with one arm and using two others to undo the tape. With the spare, he tried to wipe some mud off his cheek, but only ended up smearing it.
“I’m talan. I’m assuming you’re human, right? Sorr…[Read more]
-
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh that also reminds me, Ed needs a date.
I honestly forgot about her lol
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Oof that reminds me, Marcel needs a tux 😅
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
hehe
Violet
The girl stepped back, still reserved. “Violet. Robotics engineer and programmer. Here on a temporary scholarship trip.”
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
It sounds ridiculous, but this group of characters are named Rose, Violet and Daisy 🤣🤣 Creative ingenuity right there. Y’all should take notes.
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Fyi she belongs to a mystery story. So she and the rest of her cast are very thorough when it comes to evidence/justice/whatever. ;]
Violet
“It means bringing you to justice for being irresponsible.” Violet raised an eyebrow, and held up the robot. “And I have the evidence to prove you guilty.”
Gage twisted its head around with a mel…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Aw, I like little robot companions! They’re always so cute.
I redesigned her but forgot Gage existed for a while 😂 Originally he was a knockoff of Wall-e, which I won’t hold against my six-year-old self. Wall-e is an amazing movie.
Violet
Violet cocked her head. “And at how many inconvenient times have you scratched that itch?”
When the g…[Read more]
-
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.
I can believe it
Liko
“Well, that’s definitely a, uh, creative approach.” Liko squinted at the mess of duck tape. “Do you mind if I…?”
After a bit of shuffling, the man gave him enough room to reach the pipe. Liko then carefully began pee…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Coolsies 😛
Violet
“Gage, record.”
The robot’s eyes spun, clicking, and gazed sightlessly at the surrounding lawnscape.
“The experiment was a positive until power failed.” Violet bowed her head, hair falling over her chest. “We’ll try tomorrow. But at least, for now, we can get some key lime pie or something. Forgo any further advan…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Same thing here! I’ve been told to play sports and I’ve made… interesting attempts XD You may have been grumpy, Loops, but I’ve always been the player who was too busy watching a butterfly to notice an incoming ball.
And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.
*Watches…[Read more]
-
Loopy replied to the topic Summer Bible Reading in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 1 month ago
@theducktator oh same page summer, right? I’ve known about it, but I should probably actually do it this year 😅 Thanks for the link!
-
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ok I’m thinking there’s two entrances to the crawl space and they meet in the middle. Had to ask my construction worker brother to make sure that was actually a thing lol
Liko
After finishing his lunch break, Liko finally forced himself to do the one job he’d been procrastinating. Plumbing.
He army crawled his way through the tunne…[Read more]
-
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
lol you’re not the first person to suggest that.
I’m not a very active or competitive person, sadly. My mom did make me play one year in jr high but I did terribly because I didn’t want to be there. Jr high Loopy was just a constantly overwhelmed, grumpy little storm cloud XD Kinda feel bad for my old coach
-
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka Here’s some description. Should I rp them meeting?
Liko Landerson
Appearance: an alien, light blue skin and bluish green fluffy hair, has four arms, and is about 7’ ish tall
Personality: friendly, talkative, people pleaser, not much self confidence, cheerful and optimistic
Other: Has a small pink pet slime monster named Dusty. He w…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
I knowww, but I still love ittt 😂
-
Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
…y’all should play volleyball… just sayin’…
Height’s always helpful in that sport… XD I don’t exactly have the height, I’m only 5’ 6’’, but I’m working on my vertical >:]
Easton
He laughed. “I can’t be as specific, but yeah, we’ve been here for a few days.”
They fell into another awkward lull that Easton…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years, 1 month ago
Yes! I’ve watched the one with Gerard Butler in it. I remember it being good, but it’s been a while, so I can’t think of any specific things I liked or didn’t like about it.
- Load More
