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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, of course girl!! <333
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks!! <33
one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD
They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in ou…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Wyoh apparently doesn’t like to notify me when you tag me 😑 Anywayyyy Loved the scene! But also feel so bad for Riker!! 😥
Oh cool! Awesome!!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Felicity
She grinned.
“Great! Come on, it’s this way.”
Chase hesitantly followed her down the hall.
The vending machine sat like a crumpled tin can against the wall, with a yellow note taped to its front reading “out of order” in messy sharpie handwriting. It had pictures printed all over it, advertising various drink brands. Somehow…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
No worries! That’s still serious and important and I’ll keep praying 🙏🏻🫶🏻
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@the_lost-journal
Oh my goodness! 🫢 I can’t believe it… She’ll be in my prayers. 😥😥💕💕 -
Loopy replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,”
Waaaiiit… I think I know which vending machine this is. XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Felicity
“Uh huh. Real convincing.”
Chase looked uncomfortable.
“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,” Felicity continued. “I can show you if you want. Maybe that would cheer you up? Unless you’d rather go to class. Do you like soda?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Lois
“I, well…” Lois adjusted his glasses, avoiding eye contact with the others. “Leaving isn’t really an option for me. Especially when I’m older. My family…” he trailed off, and they walked in silence for a moment.
Then he cleared his throat and continued.
“This school is my escape, I suppose. I’m just…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
You’re alive! Yay! KP has not been behaving itself lately.
The memes are wonderful😂
Thanks hehe
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae Aww those are so cute! And the colors look so smooth. I love them.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yayy success
Mateo would be right on the line of arson and murder, lol
I can add him in. XD it’s somewhat concerning how full those two categories are.
You hit the nail on the head. In-story, little Hugo steals rare spices because he wants to learn to make fancy pastries and tea leaves.
Hehe I knew it.
I could also see…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Silencing KP in your inbox is so much work. XD *Unsubscribes* *Unsubscribes* *Unsubscribes*
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whaley the great and terrible posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey guys, I will be off KP for the next couple months (at least) due to graduation and the complications of life. I will pop in every week to update Topic of the Week and roleplay, but otherwise, I won’t be on as often. Tag me for anything I need to see.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic DnD QNA in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
If we do this, we’ll have to wait until my school year is over (around the first half of May). Graduation. 🤷♀️
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Also, back to the memes, the Maverick one is so accurate
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ah, okay. We can say Marcel is just standing between them to diffuse the tension.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Dies* *Tries not to wake up my fam* I love em
In-story, little Hugo steals rare spices because he wants to learn to make fancy pastries and tea leaves. 🤣🤣
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Loopy replied to the topic Could you survive in your story's universe? If not, why? If so, how? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
This question is making me realize how lacking my world building is.
I’d probably survive Linmaus pretty easily if I could find a job and shelter, avoid aggravating the clickmen, and don’t drink water from the center of the city. If I found and befriended Felicity, I might do better because she has some good connections in the city, but she also…[Read more]
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