Lydia S.

@whalekeeper

Yeah.

Like, Leo starts out a “looks like they could kill you cinnamon roll” character, and ends up being a “could actually kill you cinnamon roll but doesn’t really want to do it doesn’t count”. Hard to graph, and that’s just one pretty straightforward character.

@ellette-giselle

Is Rory’s knee busted? He did get thrown out of the way of a car in concrete.

Exactly.

@whalekeeper

I DON’T KNOW HOW.

XD

Actually, what was your first impression? Mine was that he IS a cinnamon roll that could ALSO kill you.

@whalekeeper

XD XD XD

I’m not sure if Leo would be offended by that chart, or be too confused over what a cinnamon roll is to get it.

Maybe Dante just goes in the middle? Like, exactly where you have him.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Okay, I’m going to move things along a bit because I feel sorry for these poor charies. Feel free to insert whatever you want. =)

Leo

“Good.” His smile widened at the relief in the boy’s eyes. Then he let the smile fade to pull out his no-nonsense voice. “Now that that’s settled, you two need patched up. Like…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

“Ah, sixteen. I was twelve when I was apprenticed to…to my mentor, but you’re not too old. None of the creeps ever came down to the basement, and if they do try it, it’s not like they’re nothing we can’t handle. Besides,” a grin broke out on his face. “It’ll give me an excuse to wear my suit to work.” Memories…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

He sighed and glanced down at his mug. Empty.

“The school is certainly… complicated. How about we just…” His gaze drifted from Barnes to Rory. Bruises, cuts, scuffs. Rory seemed to be favoring one knee. Barnes, her arm. Leo traced the pattern on the side of his mug.

Yes, Rory could fight. Barnes could too…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

BWAHAHHAHAHA! Off to the dragons with you post eating, gate keeping ghost. You are vanquished!!

*Ahem*

I uh…found myself with a few minutes of down time and decided to try logging in again and again to see if I got through.

*Glances around* *shuffles feet*

I’d better go now, but I’ll try to RP after church…[Read more]

@hybridlore

*Incoherent squealing*

@ellette-giselle

I really like the imprisoned ones. And the orphaned kiddos. XD

I noticed you don’t seem to keep to specific face structures for characters, especially Amelia’s nose? It made her a little difficult to pick out without looking at subtitles.

As for other scenes I might have liked to see…maybe right before their interrupted…[Read more]

@hybridlore @whalekeeper

I’m here, although we’re about to have breakfast, so I’ll be back …XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Awesome job. I’m so sorry Riker sometimes. Like seriously. *Sniffles*

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll join in too if that’s okay. =) My family is having a thing at our house tomorrow though, so I might not be able to stay long.

@koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)

I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little…[Read more]

@koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)

The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…

The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of…[Read more]

@hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD

@godlyfantasy12

Ah! I love it. Here’s a few questions:

1) what time of year does the book start/span?

2) what type of things does Peter’s father invent?

3) have you made incorrect quotes for these charies yet?

@keilah0h popping on to say IT’S PRONOUNCED KAY-LUH….

*Insert embarrassed emoji….ducks back underground muttering to self. Falls and bangs into ground*

This was the logline I’d wrote for it too!

A Peter Pan retelling in a steampunk YA setting, about a boy who must learn that life is worth living despite the battles.

Of course, as my books always do, there’s a theme that deals with inner/mental struggles and battles. I have my own mental struggles and family members/friends who have the same,…[Read more]