@lrose5
Active 2 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic the safe of stories in the forum Start HERE 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh, it sounds fascinating so far! I like your characters and the world is intriguing. I’ll wait to add critiques untill I understand you story more. 🙂
(By the by, I only have 16 pages for my “main” WIP, and all but four is just me getting distracted by the various backstories. But let’s not despise the day of small things. [Zec 4:10])
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
*dissolves into a jumble of joy bubbles*
It’s the little Natan boy! Awwwww.
Another great example on how to make a character sympathetic, despite being “cold as the alps.” XD
Also one of the worst heartbreaks I’ve had over a character. Thank you for reminding me.
*sniff*
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I really do have a lot of work I’m currently avoiding.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Leo
Marcel didn’t look too good, but that was kinda to be expected. What he’d give to hear the full story right now.
The elevator doors slid open. Leo led them down the winding aisles of humming machinery to the break room door. Maybe it wasn’t wise to retreat to the same position twice, but he didn’t have much of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
*still flipped on floor*
Homework…due… must save ice cream.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@Elishavet-Pidyon Here’s some Nathan quotes!
A wiry skeleton of a man crossed the courtyard between them. Strolled, actually, as if he couldn’t hear the shots whizzing overhead. They both stared in wonder.
“He’s either deaf,” whispered Anthony, “or he’s absolutely crazy.”
~Brother Enemy; Promise of Zion by Robert Elmer
“That’s it.” Ant…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ahhh, Green Ember. It’s so wonderfully good.
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Koshka replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 1 month, 2 weeks ago
1) Have you ever copied something from another book or movie or something?
Do you expect me to answer that? That’s plagiarism! *Gasp* I have written/am writing several fanfics, so there’s a safe “Yep I stole that”.
II) Have you ever started a story or poem (that had a really good plot or idea) but never finished or started…
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Koshka replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m Koshka, a writer of rustic noble-bright fantasy (of the middle-grade kind), some nonfiction (of the college essay kind), and poetry (of the I stayed up too long after midnight kind). I also like digging around in history, dabbling with random languages, and playing with pencils. Oh, and I like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!
I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write rustic noblebright fantasy, although I have been known to experiment in sci-fi and nonfiction.
You read The Adventures of Tintin? My brother got me into those a while back, but we don’t often meet people who know them. Also, Wingfeather…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
YES. Green Ember quotes!! 🐰⚔️🐺
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
To my knowledge, I’m just as free next week as this one. I can always log onto my phone etc, while working on something else. (I’ve got mostly online classes.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keiliah-h
Those are hilarious. XD Thank you for bringing laughter to my morning.
I wonder why we keep having fights. If it was run like a normal school, almost every student would be suspended indefinitely and maybe end up with a record. XD
Except my kiddos. The only time they fought was in Character Castle, but that’s because…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ahhhhhh I love those books! Crispen’s choice probably broke my heart more than Helmet from Green Ember. *Moans at the pain and beauty*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@koshka ’cause you’re the only other person I know who loves this series as much as I do.
“Well done, you cocky young ear-twitcher!”
-Urchin of the Riding Stars
“And, for the third time in his life, Urchin fell from the sky.”
-Urchin of the Riding Stars
“I mean, it’s not as if you can do one special thing, and that’s it. It’s what you go on…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Journey to Amber Forest (Book 2) in the forum Publishing & Platform 1 month, 2 weeks ago
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!
*excited gibberish*
This is wonderful!
I like the weasel too.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge
Leo
Bing!
The elevator doors slid open. Leo took one step out and gasped.
“Lelo!” Quincy sat surrounded by his shield and feathers. Marcel lay curled on the ground beside him. Shouts and flashes of light came through the open doors of the conference room.
No time to ask questions. “Grab Marcel.” Leo…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Yep. I’ll get right to it next break I get in work.
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Koshka replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I’ll be here Lord willing.
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Koshka replied to the topic Journey to Amber Forest (Book 2) in the forum Publishing & Platform 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Annnd…I feel bad for Shawn.
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