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@loopylin

I’m back now. Thank you for volunteering to crack down on me! I will start a separate form in Novel Critique Requests for this. I will tag you.

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot

Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @freed_and_redeemed

Btw, I thought I’d tag a few people and mention that I’ve been sketching characters if anyone is interested. I started the forum here.

Character Sketches

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UPDATE TIME

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

Freedom’s Fire is sooooooo close to publishing. Just waiting on the finalized cover designs, complete with the book blurb, and then it’ll all be set…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk

Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.

Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…

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@savannah_grace2009

Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.

@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed

OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.

 
Prologue
7/10/2065
 

Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]

@loopylin

Hehe I am waiting for Lois to make his move.

The only part that I didn’t already get was if Seb had knocked them unconscious or just made their brains all fuzzy.

Yep, their brains are just super fuzzy and happy rn 🙂 The idea is for them to do something that generically expresses happiness, like dancing or laughing.

Thanks for e…

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@freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @loopylin

Thank you.

@freedom @anyone-else-who-are-interested-in-the-second-ending

I posted it in the topic My short story. Warning, if you wanted a happy ending to the story, don’t read it. It’s pretty sad.

@loopylin see ya

You could probably go for a year and not miss the dance XD

@whalekeeper

Here’s another RP so the story can actually continue…

Kate

For a moment, Brian and I glanced back and forth from the now sleeping child and the unenthusiastically dancing Cole and Callipsa.

“He said sixty minutes,” I said. “I kind of want to watch to…[Read more]

@loopylin

I knooow it’s been vague, I’m sorry 😆 Teleportation just didn’t fit for him anymore. You guys deserve an explanation if I’m going to do this any longer.

Every person has a form called a lovedream, which is an exaggerated, fantastical version of their perceived identity. Or who they want to be. For example, Hugo’s lovedream looks lik…[Read more]

@loopylin

I’m not sure I understood either but it was funny and it’ll work 😂😂

@whaley

Cole

There was a bang. Callipsa jumped back, stifling a scream. Then, recovering, she spat. “Someone just shot the stupid destruction stone out of my hand!”

“With what?” was Cole’s first question. “I didn’t see an arrow.”

Callipsa rolled her eyes. “It’s…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ooh, I love those ones.

@loopylin

*agonizes over question*

Mmm… I think it’s Big Sky, MT for me, but there are so many great ones it’s really hard to pick. I’ve never heard one of their songs I didn’t love. How about yours?

@loopylin

Marcel

The other boy shrugged. “I don’t care as long as I’m not there for the romance part.”

@loopylin

Hey I wrote additional stuff if this helps 😛

Marcel

Before Lois could react, Marcel broke down into soft chuckles. “Nah… everyone’s a fool. Hey. If you think a romantic skyline would do the job -“

A business venture suddenly occurred to him. He positioned his body to block the other students from sight, as if selling somethi…[Read more]

@loopylin

I ADORE the Arcadian Wild, have you listened to their other songs?

@loopylin

I just listened to it, and it definitely fits Chase! Thank you for telling me about it!

@loopylin

LOL

Dante is just great!

@loopylin

I love that