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@linus-smallprint I love them!!

Please tell me you kept Stripe’s glasses (or at least have another bespectacled Kunulf in the story somewhere, if you didn’t) cause I love the look of it.

also Martha’s “vunny hug” clothing and your explanation of why it’s called that is really cool.

does that imply that a “vunny” exists? some animal, maybe?

@koshka

Good grief! You just made me cry!

Rory

Rory felt Leo’s arm’s go around his shoulders, and for a moment he flinched, tensing for whatever Leo was about to do to him. He knew such an outburst deserved severe punishment, and at this moment he was too broken to fight back.

Leo’s voice sounded, hardly above a whisper. “Just cry. You c…[Read more]

@rae

It took a few weeks for them to create my account. He should get an email about it sooner or later. I’d say don’t worry too much about it unless it’s been like a month or something. She should get to it before then.

@keilah-h

I know! She’s amazing!!!

Okay, thanks!

@ellette-giselle wow, I love the cover!

I like the third summary thing the best, I think.

also, what do y’all think of either of these? I’m just playing around for the moment, so feel free to tear them up.

In a world on the brink of despair, Aaron Dalvarian embarks on a perilous mission to the besieged kingdom of Ardenta. As the Empire’s ruthless forces close in, intent on conquest, Aaron carries a message of hope: the truth of…

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5.)

With this option I would put my name on the spine only. I did that with my first book, so if my name makes the whole thing too crowded then I will do this.

4.)

3.)

2.)

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

Okay, here are the options so far. What do you think?

1.)

@ellette-giselle

Well, if you can’t remember then that’s okay. lol.

This is true!

@ellette-giselle

Trust me Rory, you have plenty of company. There are several others. 😅

@koshka

Phew!  lol.

Rory

“Take whatever time you need kid. I’m listening.” Leo screwed the new bulb in place, squinting as it flickered on. He slipped the burned out bulb into his pocket and stepped down from the chair.

Rory still fidgeted in silence. Take whatever time I need? I need all the time in the world. He thought, bitter…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Noooo…… I don’t think so.

Aaron is the lead.

Turin was the ally.

Then Noah and Darrien became the Allies.

Joseph is the lead of the next book.

Sabina was the love interest/ally

Yeah. No one else I can think of.

I mean, Asher and Eric play more prominent rolls later on, but they had pretty small parts in this…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

That’s what I was thinking.

I’m going to try it a few different ways and then see what everyone thinks.

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

I know! She is fast!!

@linus-smallprint.  @keilah-h

Update.

Hey, my cover artist JUST SENT THE COMPLETED COVER!

It’s brilliant!

Anyone want to see?!?!

@linus-smallprint

Ooo, I like him!!!

I don’t know why, but this whole time I have really, really wanted one of the characters to give Stripe a hug. Like one of the little kids. It would be so cute, especially because he does not seem lie a hugs person, yet his protector side wouldn’t let him hurt a little kid. lol.

Oh that’s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Awe! I love her!! She looks like a really sweet person, and I love the longer tunic with the pants.