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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
and the story was just so entertaining, so I was like “with a little work, I could fix this up and share it with everyone!”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
@smiley actually, no, not star wars (surprisingly). But it is a sci-fi. It was based off this comic series (that I honestly don’t suggest looking up for reasons, part of my rewrite was to make a few of the jokes more appropriate and less Guardians of the Galaxy-dirty-humor-type) that I stuck an OC in for fun…..and to ship with my favorite…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I didn’t really notice that the uncle’s betrayal felt forced, but I would have to go back and look at it again to see for sure. I was so preoccupied with Yeah, I knew that was gonna happen and Oh no—what’s gonna happen to them now? To really focus on it. Unless Linus feels otherwise, I think it was fine.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Sorry this took me so long to respond—I didn’t get a notification, so I thought you hadn’t wrote back yet.
My first thought is that you would need to save Joseph, because it would be strange to kill off the main character three quarters (four fifths?) of the way through the book.
But looking past that, Joseph’s charact…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
You know you are a writer when your latest google search is this:
time difference between bee cave texas and adelaide australia
and you have been to neither of those places and this is all for one line in a fanfic that might not even make it to the next draft.
(By the way, the cities are 16 hours and 30 minutes apart.)
here are some…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper aww yes he should, that dog is so pretty!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you so, so much! You’re so sweet!
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Of course!
Oh don’t apologize girl! I completely understand that. Aww yes!! 🥹 God truly does know what we need. You’ve helped me too😌 Thank you for being so sweet!
I’ll be praying for you and if you ever need to talk I’m here! 🤍
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I like how this is going. I will be furious if you kill them, but also… I really like these scenes. The dungeons plus the hope that the Allied Armies will come in time is a great mix. I want to read more because I really don’t know which way it will go.
Thank you! I’m so glad you are enjoying the mix and the suspense is bui…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you so much!
*laughs through tears* it’s a good kind of crying.
Sorry. I’ve been having a rough time, and I think God sent you to say that this morning. 😌
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Aww girl!! Yes!! I loved itt! Definitely tag me if you write anything else for it :))
Aw nooo don’t cry 🥺
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes girlie! I’ve loved reading what you’ve written for the snowballs🤭 And I loveed your blurb for The Crimson Rose!! It sounds so good!
Oh yes pleasee
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Really? Aw that makes me so happy!
I guess I’ll have to tag you next time I get hit with a snowball! lol.
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
tag me if you ever post the whole things!
No prob. I’ve noticed a few of y’all still do. 😅
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
The closest I ever did was one of my older brother and sister (not really, but I call them that) I wrote a romance and I used some of the things I saw in their relationship and I also used their physical descriptions and a few personality traits. It was there enough that Kirsten recognized it and was over the moon, but when she told…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you!! Yes it is😥 I randomly came up with it yesterday haha, I’m planning on writing a short story about it.
And thank you for tagging Freedom, I still use her old tag sometimes😅
@freed_and_redeemed Sorry girl!
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