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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, I was talking to Linus about that. See, this book is supposed to be fast paced. You meet a lot of unimportant characters and about 50 minorly important ones that show up more than once.
By the 4th book you’ll know the cast well and things may feel less jumpy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
So glad you like her!!!
How are you so good at art?! I love it!!!!!
Like years and years and years of practice. 😅
Glad she’s perfect!
Yay!!! Does she look anything like you imagine?
aw thanks!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
also the stripes on Huntress’s cheek and neck are not shading (I should’ve done their color so they aren’t the same), they’re markings on her skin. It’s a Changeling thing (her species)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I and my younger sister sometimes have telepathy moments too, so I think it’s more of a close sibling thing.
Hey, that happens to me and my younger sister as well! We’re almost 2 years apart, but spend a good amount of time together (as homeschoolers 😝). We’re always trying to say the same thing or making the same connections.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m nowhere near finished but I decided to try my hand at shading again, so here’s my latest work in progress!
Another one of Sniper cause I draw him wayyy too much hehehe……only this time he’s with Huntress. I haven’t quite decided which scene of them this is for, but if I do I’ll post it with the finished drawing.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Wow, your depiction of her personality was really cool to read. I hadn’t even thought about all those things together like that–like how she pauses to consider different things–but you have a good point.
Awesome, thank you!! I’m glad it doesn’t seem to be too much for you guys.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh yeeaah, I did. Okay, makes more sense that you knew. 🤣 Yep, I signed up! I think I’m in Brookside Stories?
🤣🤣
Oh, awesome!! I guess I’ll see you on there, then! 😉
I don’t think I can survive another week. 😳😝 And the teacher puts ME in the trouble chair.
The trouble chair?? XD
Godzilla origins are pretty cool. Having watched som…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper very nice!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Thank you so much!!!!
She’s not smiling because I was trying to capture the way she feels to me at this point in the story. Hope that’s okay.
That’s totally fine! I like seeing how other people picture my characters–I don’t know, it’s just really interesting and cool. And yeah, I don’t know if I would imagine her smiling eit…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I like the section, though again, like we’ve talked about before, you do kind of gloss over everything and summarize it all in a page or two. That’s fine, though, if this isn’t a super important part of the story. It would be nice to get to see some more specifically of the new characters who’ve joined Julian and Leon, since we…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
(My brother isn’t my twin, he’s fours years younger, but ehh.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper yeah it seems that way. My brother and I are pretty close, so maybe we’ve had something like that all along but have never paid attention to it.
Or called it “telepathy.” Really seems more like intuition with me. Twintuition. Lol
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I know a pair of twins who say they have it, but they’re probably joking. XD I and my younger sister sometimes have telepathy moments too, so I think it’s more of a close sibling thing.
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Ruth changed their profile picture 1 year, 6 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I started gesture drawing while listening to videos on the French Revolution. And I just kept adding more. So here’s a good day’s work! (I used photo references because I want to learn how to draw quicker.) (And of course, can’t go without a little character pose on the side to keep me company.)

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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Sounds good to me! I probably won’t have a lot to offer because my art is few and far between, but it’s a cool idea.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle whoa, awesome job on these artworks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper “twin telepathy” lol people still say that’s a thing?
my twin characters, of which I have several, completely lack anything resembling that trait haha
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you!! The program I used was Procreate on iPad.
@whalekeeper thanks! His design is one of my favorites, I love to draw him.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I think I’m gonna take Chase out of the hospital now.
Though, I could’ve brought him back earlier, seen as how no one apparently knew he went there anyways
Chase
Chase walked slowly down the sidewalk, looking down at his shoes. His left arm was in a sling, his head hurt terribly, and he was tired, but otherwise okay. He halted his slow walk…[Read more]
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