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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Okay, okay, I also had it on while reading, and I was…… underwhelmed…….. To put it gently.
It just feels like the difference between a wind up music box and watching the Danish National Symphony. There just wasn’t any heart and character behind it! The music didn’t feel alive to me.
Well, there’s my honest opinion.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-gislle I probably won’t, but extending the deadline does sound like a good idea for those who do.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes, if the others are wanting to draw something this time. You can tag them and ask.
Or I can….
@mineralizedwritings @rae @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium
Are any of y’all in interested in extending the deadline, or are you just not going to be doing this character at all?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings ohhh cool!
I’ve never watched any smps, but I’ve heard they often have really expansive stories behind them. I have a free world download which I think is like the leftovers of an smp; sadly I don’t have anyone to play it with so it’s just me exploring it alone. But it’s cool to see all this stuff that a bunch of people built…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I’m still in!
Do we have a storyline or plot that I haven’t been made aware of……….?
I feel like I might be missing something?
When should I introduce my character?
Yep, tomorrow sounds great!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks! Yeah it’s a favorite quote of mine lol. It’s from LDshadowlady in the life smp, same one I mentioned above to Ellette.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings you’re welcome! Oh and your forum signature is funny, where’s it from?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@linus-smallprint That was beautiful!! One question though, how far is this in the book? Are we nearing the end, or does Alan still have some character development to do (maybe sharing this great news with his friends….?)
also the soundtrack was amazing, I had it on in the background while I was reading. It really does fit!
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Enid replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Maybe whoever wins becomes the next prompter and the next judge/one of the next judges, that seems like a fair deal.
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
Contents of Baron’s bag:
A tiny gas mask
A little note written in the hand of a little girl saying “To the white hair guy, Thank you” with a funky smiley face and signed “Rya” on the back written in a neat hand, “Your Welcome.” with a neat smiley face.
A small knife
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Good with me! What kind of setting will the characters be dropped into?
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
I completely forgot, I’m sorry 🙁
I don’t know if I’ll be able to do a drawing in time, but I can try
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sounds good to me!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh, and just a note about Baron, he looks in his twenties even though he has white hair. In case you didn’t notice

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Finally. I’ve been really looking forward to this chapter. It was good timing too. This was the point in Alan’s life when he was ready. The line “He didn’t need to become that hero, for The Saviour had been that hero for him.” is truly quotable.
Just one small thing.
You start the sentence:
After a little more hesitation. D…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
I think I’ve already posted some Marvel fanart awhile back!
I’m working on fanart for a minecraft smp I watch online rn, and I don’t really want to promote it to the younger crowd here lol. It’s not that bad, just not made for kids either.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks! It’s ok, don’t worry about it. Just knowing your thinking of me helps < 3
That’s great! I’d love to see some of it if you do start posting again!
Oh, fun. I’ve never played dnd because the groups can be so secular. I still remember trying to study next to my schools dnd club in the lobby and they could not hold the Fbombs in.…[Read more]
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Pencil
Eraser
Pencil sharpener
Mini drawing paper
Numbing cream
And I think that’s it. I may add to this list later on, but I think for now it’s good.
Why gas mask?
Over cautious and ***censured to keep back story secrets***
@raxforge you know what, since his powers are air, he wouldn’t need a gas mask, he could hold a pocket of clean air for him to breathe, so remove that from the list.
@raxforge
Wow, Baron has changed so much since this. I was going to have him be an artist, should I bring that back?
…sorry, he’s an artist?!?
He was in my earlier character designs.
Would you like me to draw something in his style?
Sure!