Loopy

@highscribeofaetherium

Afraid not. I danced until eleven and then went to bed so I could still be up early. I slept in until 6:00

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well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.

Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!

2025!!!!!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!

Happy New Year! It’s 2025!!

Happy Almost New Year! What are you guys up to?

@keilah-h

Aww, your relationship with your brother sounds so sweet.

@elishavet-pidyon

Same—we played with our stuffed animals too. We had maybe thirty of them between us, and they all belonged to a “pack” with an alpha, and a beta, etc. (Me and my sister were Erin Hunter fans.) We acted out whole storylines—probably enough to fill a novel xD.

@ellette-giselle

Wow, that’s really cool. Definitely keep them in then.

@ellette-giselle super cool!

I think my dad might have a copy of Fox’s Martyrs, but I’m not sure.

@keilah-h

Yes, it’s supposed to be fictionalized early church. I read Foxes Book of Martyrs, The Martyrs Mirror, and Acts before I wrote these, so I draw a lot out of those. In fact, a lot of the situations are real from real people’s accounts.

@hybridlore

Some I wrote, some are old, old hymns from the underground church.

@hybridlore

Thank you so much for the feedback! I loved this! It’s super helpful.

Side note: interestingly enough, you said that the second book is your least favorite, while I’ve preferred it so far to the first one. We’ll see how the third and fourth compare.

You know what, Aaron will always be my favorite character, but I’m growing to lik…[Read more]

So yeah, I will be sad, but I mostly get it.

@ellette-giselle which works for a story like yours which is, from what I can tell, supposed to be kinda like a fictionalized missionary/church history story.

@ellette-giselle

Wait, you wrote the hymns? I thought you had just pasted them in. 😳

(There’s a lot of hymns I’m not familiar with, since we don’t normally sing them at my church.)

@keilah-h

same! It hurts! But I like to keep the story real.

@ellette-giselle

I finished! (And the art for the cover is really cool.) I gave answering those questions a shot, even though you might be past the point of feedback, I figured you might want to hear what I thought.

Were the characters believable?

For the most part, yes. At times, there was somewhat stilted (slightly forced seeming, or maybe a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’ve killed my fair share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..

Yeah, I have too, or at least not stopped such a thing in a fanfic if I’m rewriting it. but usually not a main character, and not super commonly on screen.

I mean if it’s realism, it kinda has to be done (oooof I sound so sadistic for saying that, I promi…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol

hmmmmm.

I’ve killed my fare share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..

but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story,…

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but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story, you could add those too. If not to the main series you could have a guidebook where you put those special things + any maps you’ve made.

I honestly love those kinds of guidebooks.

and I’m the one that briefly considered violently blinding my character who kinda needs his sight for everything.

@ellette-giselle sorry ’bout that! Mostly I just read and enjoy the chapters. Others usually say what I have in mind.

you should be. I’m above nothing.

Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol