Loopy

@theshadow better “subjects” than “children” I suppose, especially considering how I talk about some of them. (not sure whether to glare or smirk at the characters in question here)

@rae

Well, this certain rude character, if they get too much on my nerves, will be the topic of a short story in which they DIE. That is how I deal with rude characters i dislike.

LOLLLLL

Should I be glad none of my characters ticked you off……?

actually it’d be funnier if they did…..

SOLDIER! MEDIC! YOUR TIME HAS COME, DO SOMETHING…[Read more]

@jonas

Thank you again for your help!!!

@the_lost-journal

lol, really?

Yep. ever since my mom and I had a flour fight and she said I should put it in a story.

Oh… the reason why I was asking it is….. *sigh* things don’t really go his way this chapter… at least for a part of it.

(I think you are going to grow a hatred, or less a disliking, to a certain rude character…)

Oh dear……[Read more]

@jonas

whoaaaa

that was a lot 😅😅

thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!

however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]

@linis-smallprint

yes, this is the same book that you started before. I did revise it a lot though 😂😂😅

@keilah-h

Glad you liked it

BTW did you re-use the names Fen and Tren from that one RP we had a while back ago?

Lol, you noticed. Yes, I did.

@savannah_grace2009

Gorgeous boards!! 🥰 What program did you use?

@elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.

funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often. LOL

@godlyfantasy12 hellooooo again!

haven’t seen ya in a hot minute!

So you’re not really writing much, yes. But please tell me all the characters and stuff are still around.

Crosshair will never say it, but I think he’s been missing his feathery buddy Paxton.

in other news, I finished a fanfic for once, which has a new story…[Read more]

@rae awesome!!!!

Can’t wait for more!

Feedback time lol

Indeed, the fire showed his features mostly came from his human side, besides his grey eyes. His grey eyes were deep and filled with emotion

You don’t need to reference the eyes again. A better way of doing it would be like this:

…besides his gray eyes, deep and filled with…

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@the_lost-journal

Oops, forgot to reply to your other question.

Yep, Robbie is mine! He was part of an old Historical Fic WIP.

@the_lost-journal

WAIT CAN YOU SEE INTO THE FUTURE?!

I am not kidding, there is a flour fight 😮 lol

lol, I KNEW IT!

It’s actually the first thing that pops into my mind when I put the words ‘charrie’ and ‘baking’ together.

@raxforge

Lol, I love annoying you 💕

yeah, I’ve noticed, lol

Guys are weird.

@the_lost-journal

Uh oh, I have a feeling there will be a few flour fights with how terribly these teams get along amongst themselves. Lol, this will be great.

I can’t wait!

@ellette-giselle

Wow, I’m very much satisfied with your reaction of delight.

First story ^^^

First story!

 
Clash of Winds
 

he cold little mouth of a winter night nipped at Max’s nose. His cloak was wrapped tightly around him, woven of a thin soft fabric that yet provided all the warmth of a few blankets together. Its color was shown to be green in the flickering rays of the fire, with the insignia of a Royal Guard of Loria upon the b…[Read more]

@rae

*screams in delight and dances around the room*

I’m so excited!!!!