Loopy

@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow

And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.

@theshadow

Thank you!!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.

@rae

Oh my goodness! I love that!!

I must have it! lol.

@raxforge

Oh dear. That’s hilarious!

@loopylin

Want a picture of him? (It’s when he’s older in the actual novel that he’s in.)

@koshka  @whalekeeper

Rory

Rory curled up, letting his face disappear under the comforter. It was warm and soft. Unlike the military blankets he was used to. He wondered if this was what clouds felt like. Then he shuddered. He knew what clouds felt…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @the_lost-journal

Plus, the Bible requires two things if you want to read it. Context, and an open mind. You need history and context to even understand HALF, if not ALL of the Bible.

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Context and History is all in the Bible. Reading other passages helps you understand other passages.

I would like to add something about t…[Read more]

@hybridlor

These next chapters were great!! The conflict so far is amazing and I really like how your going at a steady pace by building up Sara’a conflict, your doing it really well!!

@grcr wowww that’s such an improvement! They look great!

@the_lost-journal oh that is a pretty font!!

@raxforge ok but that kinda is what he said though lolllll

@rae haha!! I should get a sign like that.

@raxforge

People join and leave and join again. You’re free to start interacting anew with anyone you want, as long as you ask first, or you can decide to stop. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Another sign find. Immediately thought of you XD

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Barnes

”Take deep breaths, kid,” Barnes said from in the living room. “Sit on the floor or table.”

@whalekeeper

*shrug*

@ellette-giselle He definitely acts like a cinnamon roll, very sensitive, so I figured he belongs in the ‘looks like cinnamon roll, might kill you’ category XD

@loopylin

Love the symbolism! The older sheep is definitely one of those kind protective types. Also yeah, color is weird.

@grcr

They look soooo much better, that’s amazing!! 😄 Nothing like a before/after to boost your artist confidence. I like Lily best, she looks sweet.

@koshka  @whalekeeper

Idk if Rory is a cinnamonroll. He’s kind of a trained killer who’s losing it.

@koshka  @whalekeeper

Yes, it is

Rory

Rory blinked up at Leo. Now that everything had been settled, he once again felt a moment of relaxation, and with it came all the pain that the adrenaline had kept at bay. “Uh…. I don’t know what hurts worse. I just… I think I’m going to be sick.”

@koshka

“could actually kill you cinnamon roll but doesn’t really want to do it doesn’t count”

Exactly! There are a few characters who fall under that category. Just a natural result of having a powerful/combat-worthy protagonist, I think.

@koshka

Is Rory’s knee busted?

I’m pretty certain this is true