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@Ethryndal I know. My impeccable memory and attention to detail must have failed me then. *hangs head in shame*

I was so happy to be proven incorrect though. XD

@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.

@anne-of-lothlorien I second everything @adry_grace has said. (How come these people are so good at voicing my exact opinion?) I love the ending. LOVE. And the present tense is good too. 🙂

@anne-of-lothlorien *groans miserably and winces* Agh, I’m sorry, I have to leave for homeschool co-op in fifteen minutes, and there’s no way I can draw something that fast. *headdesk* I’m sorry. 🙁

@delightinlife Sure, I’ll beta-read it. Just make sure you start a separate thread for it, and don’t post it here. Otherwise, it might get lost among all the writerly ramblings. 🙂

@gideon-sowdon @dragon-snapper Oops. Um…I plead artistic license. 😀

@anne-of-lothlorien Challenge excepted.

@gideon-sowdon Aye, he did.

I will tag @audrey-caylin for another opinion on Blogger (and blogging in general). Just to make things confusing. 😀

@dragon-snapper The more I think about it, I realize that this sums up my blog perfectly. XD

@daeus *screams and hides in piles of gold*

@graciegirl Okay. Sounds like you want to start a blog for personal reasons, not just platform building. I actually know something about that! Shocker. Can we take a moment to be amazed by this monumental…moment?

*takes a moment* Anyway. For #1, I say yes. This is one of the reasons I started blogging. I too was having problems with disciplined…[Read more]

@Emma-Flournoy Ha, yes! When we finished BotFA a few days ago, one of my first thoughts when we came to the funeral scene was, “Emma lied to me!” and a profound feeling of betrayal. Peter Jackson, I’m sorry for casting aspersions on your character. I was led astray. 😉

*blissfully grins with you* It makes me incredibly happy too. He needed it.

@Winter-Rose I’m really glad it’s helpful. 😀

@ETHRYNDAL remember I wailed on this thread that Thorin didn’t have the Arkenstone with him in the funeral-ish scene? On page 3. But we finished watching BotFA a little bit ago, and HE DID HAVE IT! It was on him; he was sort of holding it. Peter Jackson, I apologize for yelling about that. I was wrong. It was THERE INDEED! This makes me so…[Read more]

Aha, there we go.

Part Two

It was no nowhere in sight. — it says ‘no nowhere’

out you!” My grandpa yelled from the dining room. — ‘My’ = ‘my’

Don’t worry, it get’s worse. — ‘get’s’ = ‘gets’

throwing open it’s doors — ‘it’s’ = ‘its’

My mother want’s me — ‘want’s’ = ‘wants’

need to go home,” Liam eased — period after ‘home’

the door for you,” L…

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No success. I’ll try it in two parts.

@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Judger. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.

Part One

“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘ob…

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@anne-of-lothlorien Um…or two. 😀

@BethanySinkyRoses Hey! Welcome here. 🙂 My oldest sister’s name is Elizabeth. 😀