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@alia ah, yes, schoolwork. :/ I’m only on now cuz I’m taking a break from it.

@rochellaine @ingridrd @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira Anyone wanna write with me? I’m on for a little bit.

Here is a question.  How can I make my first chapter grab the reader, but also make it relate to the story and make my reader care about my MC?

@arie-ashira okey-dokey 😉

@alia @seekjustice @jane-maree @ingridrd @notawriter @itisastarrynight @daeus

@epicaddie2 Cool you have a blog! It looks great! I can’t think of any questions at the moment (I’m sure I’ll think of a million as soon as I submit this post), but I thought I’d tag some folks so they knows about your blog 😉

@jane-maree @catwing @seekjustice @rochellaine @skredder @ingridrd @dragon-snapper @dekreel

@jenwriter17 Good idea!  Yes, tag more people please!

@alia ah, yes I think somebody else here mentioned this. it is awesome! 😀 thanks for reminding me, cuz I forgot about it.

@ariel-ashira watching movies with this kind of situation may help, cuz then you can see facial expression and feelings better than a book. since the relationship is a good one between the son and his family like you say, there will most likely be shock and lots of tears. Some people, when they see someone they thought dead for several years,…[Read more]

@alia I know what you mean.

@skredder He had really good relationships with his family before he was taken away.  Good point!

@alia Thanks!

@jess-penrose Not so great. 🙁  But right now I’m taking a break to look at Alia’s speech for her.  Maybe when I get back to writing after that it’ll go better.

@alia Goodnight!

@jess-penrose How’s it going?

@alia Sure thing!  Any particular reason you asked me? 😀  (I love the Civil War, but don’t remember if you know that or not…)

@alia It was going really well today, but now I’m suddenly stuck.  Not because I wouldn’t necessarily know what to write, but because I’m feeling a strange apathy.  I need to get excited about it again.  But right now it’s not going anywhere. 🙁

@alia @jess-penrose Hello!  I’m back.

@alia Well, it’s time for Family Worship now, so I’ll be back in about half an hour, probably.  See you in a bit!

@alia I understand: it’s hard for me to ask Him and be ready to accept that it may not be His will for me to do what I was wanting.

@alia Are you back yet?  I am at a slow point in my writing and need some encouragement to keep going.

Anyone else writing? @skredder @jess-penrose @ariel-ashira

@alia Of course you scared me off!  I’m just trying to look out for the safety of my characters. 😛

Well, I dropped out for a little bit because I wanted to write without getting distracted, but if you’d like to do a word war that would work to the same purpose.  How about it?