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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month ago
Well, it’s the end of October and I have been waiting with bated breath! (very patiently, I might add)
Do you have any answers to the questions, or do you want to wait until the VERY end of October?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I think murderer could work as long as he said Like murderer, or almost was a murderer. If you want him to say something that he is, he could think of himself as a monster or wild beast. Or, since he is trying to be the hero, an interesting flip would be to have him decide, “I’m not the hero, I’m the villain.” That would flow…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.
*Poofs out of nowhere* *Nods* Mm, classic. Has it inspired part of your story or…? *Poofs away again*
*Returns the normal way by walking* Just wanted to say your chapters are really solid, and I can pretty much pick any of them, read it, and have an interesting time. I can…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I need to read Little House on the Prairie again. –you
First off, why? –Ellette
yeah that is a little random. It’s somebody’s memoirs and doesn’t seem to have anything to do with your story……
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
WHAT! He didn’t go save Martha!!!!
Alan! Grrrrrr!
It was a good chapter. I liked it. I especially liked the brothers, (John and James.) Their relationship is a lot of fun.
i don’t know who you meant by anyone going to far, but I don’t think anyone did. However, I thi9nk saying Alan is a murderer is going to far. He hasn’t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint wow!!
also, I’m not sure if you’re referring to Alan or Rour, but I think neither of them went too far. They both are wrong about something and think they’re right, and as such it’s messing with their minds.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
It’s been long enough since I’ve actually listened to it that I can’t remember the song is message.
Ah, well yes. The message is not the best. In fact, I normally skip that entire scene when watching that movie. But, it was funny that you brought it up.
Ah yes, Martha and Eric.
I absulutly LOVE what Martha did. Even thoug…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
OHHHH…..
I had no idea he was no longer human.
No, no, I totally agree with the sin thing. There is no “little sin”.
I like the idea of him having life lasting consequences. It’s going to really hurt for him to have to tell her they can’t have kids because of what he did, and to know his choices are causing her grief.
I…
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
It was the expression, the word choices, the interaction of all three of them combined with personality…
Yeah, something about that. I can’t pinpoint it either.
Btw, if Alan doesn’t end up loving Martha I think I’m going to kill him. THEY. ARE. PERFECT.
Just saying.
I completely agree, although I’d like to ask @linus-smallprint…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium  @mineralizedwritings @rae @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @loopylin
Nice.
November 3rd works for me!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr  @mineralizedwritings @rae @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @loopylin
Well………. who has the next drawing prompt? If no one wants to go I have one……….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
I know! They both like horses, are sentimental, and are separated from their fathers at some point, who they both care for. When I put them together, they just seem to get along really well. And this is just the start. Later on, there will be more moments that will make them seem like Martha would make an excellent wife for Alan.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
i know!
Oh, thank you! Yes, my real name is Ellette. I love it. It’s Anglo Saxon and doesn’t really exist anymore.
Yes really! I probably have every Narnia meme there ever was. lol. (except the ones with language. Spoiling a good meme with bad words. It’s horrid.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Mannnnn!!!!! This just got intense!
Shattering Glass! Eric is about to get everyone in a whole world of mess. Poor Martha. She’s such a sweet girl. Oh, that conversation between Eric and his siblings, that was one of your best scenes you have every done. I don’t know why, but for some reason the way you have been writing feels…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
You mean just the quote? Or Thor as well?
All of it, because it’s so not Eric that it’s so funny.
Chapter the 21st – The Arrest
Oh Shoot.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
Okay, now I’m going to make everyone lose their mind, and I think I’m going to tag
Because For some reason I feel they deserve it. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr  @mineralizedwritings @rae @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h
So, who’s next? Was someone else in line, or is it open? If no one has a better idea we could start over with Linus and work our way back around.
You should join us! I’ve seen your art!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
I’m going to die laughing, because in a really weird way that totally fits Eric!
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
I just looked up what sweet potatoes and marshmallows is and I am going to have to try it. No kidding.
I usually get together with my cousins on Thanksgiving and have takeout Chinese food. 🙂
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