Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h  and @rae

Sorry everyone, school lasts too long -_-. (I miss homeschooling :(. )

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I’m kind of confused… is this where we get potato pictures?

No? This is where if you wondering what potato you would be.

Hello Magic Potato. What potato am I?

You forgot the havoc part…[Read more]

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It wasn’t long before Asher, Eric, and Alicia were also awake. The five sat silently in the bedroom, listening breathlessly for any sound from downstairs. At last, Alicia spoke. “Do you think I should go down there and check?”

Sabina shook her head. “Noah said to stay.”

“But i…

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who of you will be willing to ask the magic potato FIRST?!

(To ask him you have to say “Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?!” you have to say it just like that! (Ignore the havoc part…))

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I’m the eldest. Remember that whole eldest child sympathy party I started with Martha?

Ah yes. I remember now.

Let me help you get back on track with your American spelling:

You are horrid.

That doesn’t help.

It’s reading. I’m reading you write that word wrong, and now I’m spelling it wrong.

Why am I heavily s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!!

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Is it just me, or does anyone else think he’s lost his mind?

@linus-smallprint While I did agree that Ellette’s concept of Joseph sensing evil in the temple was realistic, I can get behind you too when you say you don’t want to write about demons and such.

Personally, I think it all depends on the story. Your story has no need of it anyway, so it wouldn’t be wise to include it.

@linus-smallprint

Lovely, lovely.

Thank you so much!

I am editing up the next section an should post it soon.

That makes sense about Adrian. So wait, are you older or younger then your brother? (I guess you would actually have background on the relationship from both prospectives. Either from being the youngest, like Joseph, or the older…[Read more]

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(Though I guess Darrien might be panicked.)

Yeah, he’s panicked. He has no idea who Julian is, so the only reason that seems reasonable for a soldier to be here is to arrest those who were hiding him.

Again, another lie that feels wrong to me, and not just because I believe it is wrong for Christians to lie. I think it is…

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(By the way, I should let you know that I’m not bothering to read the feedback others are giving you, so if anything has come up that you want more thought on, please let me know.)

Will do. It’s mostly the newest section from this morning that I’m anxious about, because the dynamics are delicate. as you will see. And I’m i…[Read more]

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Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.)

How dare you question my wise and perfect choice of exclamation marks! I have perfect contr…[Read more]

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Wooph! Got a lot to catch up on! Let’s see how far I get before I have class…

Yeah. Sorry about that. I kinda went on an editing streak and hybridlore was encouraging it. lol.

In the part where he is watching Arron in the fountain, he puts an end to it, and I was saying he was harsh based of of that. But I forgot tha…

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NEXT SECTION!!

Joseph sat at the table staring at nothing.

In the corner, Sabina was holding a sobbing Eric, and Asher was sitting beside Noah, his face pressed against him. Alicia was at the other end of the table, her hands over her face.

Darrien had a hand on Joseph’s shoulder…

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Here is Joseph!

(Adrian was posted at the bottom of page 8 for anyone that missed that.)

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Does anyone want to see a Joseph or Adrian aesthetic board?!?

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3rd SECTION FROM TODAY

I am on a roll!

Poor Linus. You’ll have so much catching up to do. Sorry.

Another long day passed in prayer and fear. Noah and Darrien had to leave for work as normal, but this time it was much harder for Joseph to see them go, and it seemed to be the same f…

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ah yes, my struggles with the male sex and relationships. *sighs* Guys just don’t make sense sometimes. (and girls totally do because who would ever be confused by girl relationships and emotions. no one. Right?)

That new section looks good. The end feels like a perfect transition to a scene with Adrian… is that what happens n…

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2nd SECTION FROM TODAY

Sorry it’s really short. I have to leave. I’ll post more this afternoon or tomorrow, depending on when I get home.

Joseph lay on his bed, sobbing.

Noah had finally decided they could come out of hiding and carried him home. Now Joseph lay and cried. First…

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NEXT SECTION!!!!!!

The days passed one by one. Adrian remained in hiding, and Joseph spent more and more time with him, listening as he told stories of his early childhood with his brother– the days before the army.

Adrain spent hours in study, and Joseph was often at his side, re…

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