@linus-smallprint
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint lol I just met Oliver the gorb and I have to say I like him because he’s just like my two Aussie characters….XD
I really hope he won’t betray Alan and Tyn or something. (By the way, I like Tyn, She’s really cool.)
Despite the fact that you said Lyens explicitly forbid wearing hats, I keep imagining Oliver wearing a slouch…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint Well, I think the story is solid, but there are a lot of little missed punctuation and stuff that could be fixed. That’s fine though, it didn’t make the story less enjoyable.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh! You’re reading the first chapter! Wow that was some time ago.
Ah yeah, sorry about that. And yes, the reason Sara couldn’t hide was because Don had to stall the agents while Sara closed the hiding place. You see, they all three were supposed to escape together, but the agents moved to fast and they had to resort to a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint lollll
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ron honestly does sound a smidge cooler in a way. He still has to beat out Crosshair though, who’s held the top spot among my favorite military characters for 5 solid years.
Fair enough. I’ll send you a Ron scene once I have one. For now you’ll have to be satisfied with Jonathan.
I read the chapters you posted. P…
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TheShadow replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s a good point, I guess I’ll have to think about the mutant thing more. I was thinking of maybe replacing them with regular people who are forming gangs to survive, and maybe show how desperation can divide people (which is also dark but can show that being alone and only thinking of yourself, jumping to the worst con…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint I read “The Chapter Before” and it’s really good!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot
Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.
@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed
OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.
Prologue
7/10/2065
Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I have an idea for a book, but I’m not sure if it’s too dark to write about. It was essentially going to be dystopian and where atomic bombs destroyed the major cities of the world, but looking back on it I realized how dark that actually is.
The main message was going to be that no matter how dark the times are, there is always hope and God will…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint ahh ok
@rae ok scratch that. But I would like a picture of at least the species Tenz is (or if he’s a hybrid, images of each creature he’s a hybrid of) if you have any.
By the way, when’s the deadline?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, I finished my drawing. Do i post it now, or am I supposed to wait for a certain date?
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Loopy replied to the topic Deadline Club? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint This sounds like a great idea! I need a lot of accountability too, though I’m not focusing on writing rn because summer is pretty busy. But I could definitely try to help keep you motivated! I tend to be forgetful, but I can try my best to be helpful
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint It’s really fun!
@rae do you have a picture of Tenz? A drawing, faceclaim picture, anything?
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay…
@keilah-h @grcr @loopylin @theshadow @linus-smallprint @idk
I’m going to do Tenz, my innocent little warrior who thinks water is only for drinking.
Tenz in his normal form
He is tall, towering over me at a little more than six feet, with a slim athletic build. An almost perfect balance of power and speed. Despite this, I can only ever…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks for the challenge and the constructive criticism! I had fun, too! I don’t usually draw monsters or animals of any kind, so that was a fun change from my typical teenyboppers, lol. 😄😄
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! I really love this character/ world building concept and had a lot of fun drawing it. I’m really curious now how Charles holds down the strings on the fret board without ruining it with his claws lol
He is unable to turn his ‘hands’ upside down, the same way you cannot bend your leg so that your foot is facing backw…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks!
Thank you, and this challenge was super fun, it really helped with over coming my drawing block (also I think how I replicated the feet is because I’m a bit of a perfectionist lol).
All of your drawings were great, and congrats Loopylin!!
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