Linus Smallprint

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Yes, I think this will help.

Thank you so much!

@linus-smallprint

Because, your country seems to have a little superstition what with the wizards and all that. In the olden days, (which your book is fantasy so i can’t quite tell the era) People were really cruel to lefties because they believed it was a sign of demonic inhabitants or the practice of witchcraft. Soooo, I thought that might be…[Read more]

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Hey, I had an interesting thought……. Is Alan left handed?

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Ok, all y’all who have stuck with me through all of this, I have a question.

Is anyone willing to help me write a blurb? I keep trying and nothing sounds right? Anyone have ideas or examples?

Also, I’ll try to get another section tomorrow. I’m a little distracted with the publishing process of…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Ok, all y’all who have stuck with me through all of this, I have a question.

Is anyone willing to help me write a blurb? I keep trying and nothing sounds write? Anyone have ideas or examples?

Also, I’ll try to get another section tomorrow. I’m a little distracted with the publishing process of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh No! I’m sorry! Did I forget to tag you?

@theshadow

Thank you so much!

I’m so excited to see what you draw for him!

Everyon’s art on here is amazing so this is going to be so fun, (and hard) to judge!

@linus-smallprint that’s ok!

@linus-smallprint wow great picture!!!

@linus-smallprint

OH MY GOODNESS!! I love the picture! I think that’s your best one yet!!!

@linus-smallprint

Eric might actually find this repulsive. He’s a bit of a germaphobic.

Oh goodness. I dislike germaphobic guys. 😛

I’m glad this was helpful tho! Sometimes I just need people to give some ideas and it helps me come up with new ones. ;D

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Why must you do this! (It’s not like I did the same thing with a character just a little while ago!)

Ok, this can be tough, cause yeah, you do need some decisiveness for this.

Hmm, is procrastination a character trait? If I’m reading the above right it is. Since that is so, Alan (and maybe Martha) can get a little annoyed at…[Read more]

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No problem.

I’m willing to listen if you want to bounce ideas btw.

@linus-smallprint

I think you meant, ‘This past month he had…’

Is it? That one ALWAYS gets me. I can never figure out a way to remember which is which. grrr. Grammar is gonna kill me. Btw, I can’t get over the fact that we keep correcting each others grammar. lol

I like where this is going. Getting George Muller vibes here.

It’s not like I lov…[Read more]

For whatever reason, I did not get an email notification for Ellette’s challenge and forgot about this, so I will tag myself before I forget again.

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I’m kind of bored and I just wanted to pop in on this conversation cuz I find it really interesting!

If my brother were to accuse me of not caring (which might actually happen), I would get even more frustrated because I would want to care more, but find myself unable to.

YES THIS IS SO ME! I mean I’d definitely…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

One afternoon, Aaron was sitting on the edge of his bed, studying his Bible, when Noah stepped into the room, a Bible in his own hands. “Aaron, can I talk to you?”

“Yeah sure,” said Aaron, motioning to the bed.

Noah sat down. “Aaron, I was reading through the Bible, cover to cover as you sugge…

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At last, the curfew was slowly lifted and the citizens were allowed to return to a more normal life. Never were they allowed to leave the city. The Imperial soldiers began causing problems, turning families out of their homes to accommodate the Officers. All of the large building taken to quarter…

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Noah knew he was dead, he just didn’t know that Aaron was there when he died. Does that section need to be re-written to make that a little clearer? He’s not confused, he just was asking Aaron why he didn’t tell them that he had to see it happen. That’s rough, you know? You can’t just bury that one.

Yes, he did write in his…[Read more]

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Yeah, honestly, if you were to show some good parental interaction along with the bad, and show as the author that you don’t believe the while children know best thing, then I think you’re set.

Oh that’s awesome! I bet that was so fun to see her again! And her husband too. Hope you had a great time! I’ll probably have to cut…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

here we go. Again, love feedback on Aaron here. I’m feeling pretty confidant, so it might all come crashing down. XD

The next evening found Aaron on his knees again. He found he was spending a lot of time that way, and he wasn’t finding any peace. Every night he cried out questions, and never o…

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