Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Oh man. What did I say. Come on Alan, get some sense in your silly head!

My only complaint in this one would be A.) You used “whipped” instead of “wiped” (a mistake I myself often make which is why I caught it, lol) and then the Do not, would not, will not, etc. Like I’ve said before, it doesn’t fit with the style of the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint I can get behind the not wanting to be baptized in front of everyone thing. I’ve been a Christian for as long as I can remember and am just considering being baptized (mostly because I’m almost an adult and would like that to be my first decision made as an adult, to show I’m not just doing it because my parents did it), and…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint ooh awesome!!

@rae ahh ok! Yeah it’s a little more intuitive, but hard to get used to. also that’s an awesome name for the Skwadron. Any in universe reason why the word is spelled with  “SK” instead of “QU” or was it just for fun?

@everyone else I know I said I was going to judge today, but I’m not sure if everyone who did a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I also like to see the variety of personalities in different characters as they become Christians.

YES! Flat characters are no fun.

Prediction: Something dangerous is just around the corner.

What would ever make you say that……………?

@linus-smallprint

Phew! That’s a lot about horses. I think I will grab everything you said about them and save it in a document for future reference. In case you could not tell, Martha likes horses and would definitely know all of this, so in order to have her talk about it, I will need to know it. Thank you for typing this all out!

You’re w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ok, i finished reading everything you have written and here are my notes.

Chapter 6

Roof, the poor kid has someone aiming a crossbow at him all day? That won’t make him nervous by any means. Oh no, he’ll be cool as cucumbers. 🙄

I KNEW the crow was the spy. I am sure of it now! Creepy.

Oh man, Phil is the oldest of my bro…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@linus-smallprint

Ok, I’ll go for it. Thank you for the encouragement. Give me a second to get another scene.

@linus-smallprint

So I guess what really would be the case is that their instincts act up when they think they are in danger. If they feel more secure, they are able to control themselves more, even if they really are in more danger.

Ah, I see.

Okay. I hope you are able to deal with that mould and that your 18th birthday goes well. Happy early…

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@linus-smallprint

ah, I’m glad we’re on the same page. I was afraid I was going to get a lot of flack. lol. Tell your brother great job for standing up for something like that in an unpopular time. (You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

ah, I’m glad we’re on the same page. I was afraid I was going to get a lot of flack. lol. Tell your brother great job for standing up for something like that in an unpopular time. (You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well, it’s not like I won’t read them or y’all are evil for writing them. I just don’t believe it’s right. That’s not to say that women need to be pussy cats or wilting violets, but there is a TONE out there for them to do besides killing each other in battle. Leave the fighting to the men. I am not against Women dispatchers, women…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Interesting. My line of thinking was that the Bible says A.) the world will see us as fools and the gospel will sound foolish to them, and B.) Christ said to let the children come to him, for of such is the kingdom of heaven, and unless we believe like children we will not enter.

@linus-smallprint

Great! I have just started Chapter 6, but I’m in the middle of shooting one character and saving another, so I need to finish up with all that. lol. Then I’ll keep reading.

Here are my notes so far…..

Notes For The Narrow Path Trilogy

Ok Linus, I’m going to take notes as I go.

Prologue:
It’s really good, and It’…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Oh, I will bother you for chapters. Don’t encourage me. haha

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thank you so much! This is very helpful.

Yes, I will definitely talk to the boys (my brothers) about this, though they are a lot younger then Aaron and Turin, so it might be different for them, (right?)

Thanks again so much for taking the time to write all this out and explain it! This is totally going to help so much!

I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great. So far I’ve been reading through and I think I’m on chapter seven…. ? I’ve been jotting down notes as I go. i don’t know if you’re interested in them or not.

Did you see the newest LTBL section I posted?

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I’m a little scared……. lol. Here’s a short section.

Aaron had been speaking for more than an hour, carefully explaining the Gospel from the garden to the resurrection. Now, he looked about at the people. A few were crying, most stared at him, in disbelief, and a few had suspicion in…

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@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I kinda feel like this died out……… should I post anymore or are y’all no longer interested in it? If you aren’t that’s ok.

Thanks for all y’all’s help!

@linus-smallprint Please correct me if I’m wrong about guys