Linus Smallprint

Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.

Only critique would be this line.

looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith

It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!

Also, how old are the kids now?

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago

Aaron….

BAD IDEA 😬😬😬

my guy you’re gonna get yourself killed :/

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Okay. As long as you don’t hate him haha 😂😂😂

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

Aww thanks girl <333

What’s your favorite one so far? (Or character or scene)

HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

@savannah_grace2009
These past chapters have been really good!

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

BUT WHY DO YOU HATE HANS

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

I don’t hate Hans, I’m just pretty much indifferent on the subject.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

yeah, go ahead and call backup. You’re gonna need it.

High five!

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

Tags: @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr (CASSIAN SCENE ALERT)

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

This looks interesting. what is it? can I join y’all?

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

girl you have no idea…

I’m calling in backup.

@RAE HELP ME THEY ARE ATTACKING OUR POOR HANS 😭😭😭😭

I’m choosing to ignore that offensive statement 😢😢😔

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Except the people who don’t love him.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

EVERYBODY LOVES HANS <3

I don’t think so.

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Again…

HANS IS MY POOR BABYYYYY

EVERYBODY LOVES HANS <3

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Ok, whatever. I guess I’ll just try to deal wh=ith it. It’s been doing since I started being on here.

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009

I can say what I like, thank you very much. It is America after all.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago

Next section!!

It was nearly dark when the two rose to head back to the house. Turin laid a hand on Aaron’s shoulder. “Aaron, I am sorry,” he said.

“What for?” asked Aaron.

“For the way I have treated you and encouraged Sabina to treat you. We were both wrong, and I am most to blame,” s…[Read more]

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Yep.

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

@highscribeofatherium

I haven’t seen it eat any posts recently, have you? Not since Kathleen banished Wyoh from KP.

Yeah, me neither.

Good riddance XD

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Aaaaaaand I hate Hans already.

Not only can you not say that when Rae’s around….

You can’t say that when I’m around…

HANS IS LITERALLY MY POOR BABYYYYY AND I LOVE HIMMMM NO MATTER THAT HE’S THE VILLAIN

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago