Linus Smallprint

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s fair lol

@ellette-giselle

thanks!!! I’ve been having a lot of deep thoughts lately XD lol

I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios brothers is better at him in som…

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@savannah_grace2009

Nooooooo no spoilers 🫣

@whalekeeper

Sooo

I think I have an idea for Lilitu’s internal conflict!

I’ve been plotting a lot today, if you couldn’t tell 😂

Sef is self depricating, like you said. She’s more like “I’m stupid. I’m worthless. I’m not worthy of love.”

What I did is prayed before developing characters today and asked God to show me verses to base the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feeli…

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Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feelings of being important and a…

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@savannah_grace2009

Aw, that’s so sweet. It’s always so fun to find a character you can relate to!

Ah, thanks for the heads up! I’ll go see right now.

I’m just waiting for you to go to my WIP page and freak out XD XD

@ellette-giselle

I don’t see either, to be honest XD

I see myself in her. I love her personality and…idk, I just want to give her a hug, the poor girl 😭💔💗💗

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you so much!

You like Sabina? Do you see redemption in her, or are you just hoping?

@ellette-giselle

I love these scenes! You’re very talented, and I can see you have a passion for sharing Jesus through your writing! Keep it up!

Sabina is my favorite! 💗 (I also love her name)

@everyone

Okay.

For those of you sad and mad about Cass….

I have some spoilers.

So if you hate spoilers, LOOK AWAY

I’ve been brainstorming a lot about Cass’s character, and I have come to a decision.

Cass is a perfect example of how even strong Christians give up, how someone who appears to be a superchristian can fall and crumble under…[Read more]

K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow

As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.

By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…

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@linus-smallprint

Ah, yeah, I posted it several days ago and was like, “wonder where everyone is….” then I realized I didn’t tag y’all. lol.

Haha, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Sabina…. poor girl. You can see she loves her brother dearly, and she was very frightened for him. But, she also feels betrayed. Poor thing, she’s so tangled up…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh no that’s ok! I’m glad you like it!!

@esther-c

I assume you’re speaking of Nathan?

Thank you! I’m glad you like it!

@savannah_grace2009

What did I say! I knew there was something more to Eloy! I really like him now.

Cass is a jerk.

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings

Aw, thank you so much, y’all!

Wow Min, that’s pretty good! I don’t know if I thought of him as that solemn in my mind, but maybe he is! lol. He is my FAVORITE LOTR character because he is THE BEST!

Also, odd question, does anyone know why I no longer get an email when I get tagged? It happened all the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

No that’s not overwhelming me!!! <3

Actually that makes a lot of sense.

I have to think about that XD XD (and pray about it too!) because that would work really well!!!

Aww thanks for asking!

If you look at the Prayer Requests topic I posted about how I’m doing (sorry I’m tired and don’t feel like retyping all that lol)

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