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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
So I guess that chapter by itself doesn’t seem necessary, but the Pythonos is going to kidnap her and Jyron and use them as hostages so that their father will provide military forces and supplies to start a war against the Paynes.
Does that make sense?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I did mention a possible explanation for why the prisoners might call it that, although I’m not sure it would account for why the Pythonos do.
There are other “units”, this is just the main one and the most important one.
Okay though, that would be hilarious if that actually happened, if Marcurious asked Jraldath why it’s called the UN…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I know it’s a little rough, but it’s my first draft so definitely far from perfect, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Here’s a little snippet from the next chapter from Liv’s POV:
Chapter 17
“I’ll race you to the brook,” Jyran smiled crookedly over his shoulder, barely giving Livia a chance to agree before giving his mount Irwin a gentle squeeze with his calves and galloping away in a cloud of dirt.
Liv tucked a strand of her azure hair behind her ear,…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, I’ll work on the idea about the horses.
EXU…I kind of like that. We’ll see though. Imagine if I did do EU…and someone from Europe read that, they’d be like “Europe’s not like that at all!” jk.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I might just keep it the UNIT, then.
You keep asking, though, why it is the “unit” and how is it the definition of the word. I tend to be lazy and not overthink it. Correct me if I’m wrong but does it really matter why it’s called that? If so, why does it matter? (sorry if I sound like a brat rn, I’m just kind of confused.) It is just a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry. Brain fart. I meant EU. (Why did I put P?) But then that reminds me of the abbreviation for Europe. So idk.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
So in my WIP, Liv has a horse named Xandro. I was thinking that all the races have horses that are intelligent and match the “color scheme” and have the same powers. For example: Liv in an Aquino, she has blue hair, eyes, skin, clothes, and has the power to manipulate water. Xandro has a blue coat, eyes, hooves, mane and…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, ofc!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
In that case, maybe the prison could be split into several units and you could call this one the ‘Experimental Unit’
Okay, I like that. Maybe I could call it the EP instead of the UNIT for short? (I know, so creative…not.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I love conviction! And oh my gosh, Flaz would drive Ellis insane, this is going to be hilarious!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
This is going to be great XD XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I love Conviction 😂
Oh no. The character I’m going to use also has a talking sword lol.
Now I’m imagining just a couple of swords, having a conversation 🤣🤣
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*thumbs up*
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ok! 😃 thanks, I’ll introduce my character later.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@all-the-peoples
Im considering joining here. Could someone tell me what’s going on 😅?
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yw! Haha don’t worry there’s really no ‘right’ and ‘wrong’ when it comes to mood boards. Everyone on KP has insanely different styles.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Personally, I use paint.net. It’s probably not the best, but it works.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Editing a post causes it to get deleted in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 11 months ago
It worked for me.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Editing a post causes it to get deleted in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 11 months ago
I’ll try.
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