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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Why, Leon, why? Why did you have to say that? 😅
Zahlin
“You’re bold.” The man said, “How can we be sure there are even any dragons to fight?” The man stepped closer. “Say, how old are you and what’s your name? Why you look double what I am.”
Oh dear. Said the Sword, And I thought this was going quite well. Please don’t murder him…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
K thx. And yes, a daily recap will likely be very helpful 😅
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Is Leon armed? And how old is he? I can’t find where you introduced him.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
From what I have seen, I’m thinking Ellis might not like him, but we’ll have to wait till he actually shows up to interact with them.
Ellis doesn’t like anyone, lol XD
(except guys that have cool swords. Even then, there’s a chance he’ll hate you)
(just kidding.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Pronunciation: Otto-line (Otto as in the name otto plus line)
Ottoline
“Are you chilled?” He asked.
“I-I-” she began. She desperately wanted to run, but her feet might as well have been useless bricks.
“She’s alright,” a familiar voice spoke from next to her. Hugo. “She’s just a little on edge.” Ottoline managed to smile at him g…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ottoline
Oh no.
The man approached, sword at his side. She shrank back, looking frantically for Hugo. Her heart beat faster with panic as she saw Hugo talking to Kari and Hedieh and Amir across the room.
She froze.
“Hello, my name is Lord Nahim,” he said.
Oh no. Ellis probably sent him to kill me because he’s too much of a…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I was waiting for someone to ask that 🤣
The answer is no. There are no dragons in Nathir, though they do have legends and stuff and the Sword claims to have killed some lol. He’s probably not lying.
Zahlin
“Better get used to the idea. Fast.” Zahlin told him.
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Sorry this was so short, I’m out of ideas and I have to go ὠ…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I still think it’s funny (as far as I know, at least) that Zahlin has, like, four inches on everyone else here 😂😂
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Bwahaha I’m looking forward to this.
Btw he wouldn’t know Zahlin’s name yet.
Zahlin
“Fight?” The man said, “why would I need to fight?”
Mmm… not the sharpest, is he? The Sword said in Zahlin’s head.
“Yes. I can fight.”
”Good.” Zahlin nodded. “Ever killed a dragon?”
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Lol. Yeah, I think Zahlin knows he wasn’t there before.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol maybe not the best introduction 🤣🤣
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@everyone
Zahlin
After a few rounds through the maze of hallways, it became apparent there was no armory. Annoyed and frustrated all over again, Zahlin stalked back to the hall. He walked up to the first person he saw.
“Can you fight?” He demanded.
***You guys can decide who he’s talking to.
Man, Zahlin has just been being so rude! Sorr…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ah, ok.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@everyone
Also, prepare yourselves. Zahlin is about to start interrogating people about their fighting capabilities as soon has he gets back lol 😅 -
HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Wait, who’s Hedeih and who’s character are they?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol well to be fair he did apologize.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Most likely a culture who doesn’t fight, isn’t going to have an armory.
Hmm… didn’t think about that XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Probably? Just don’t expect her to be totally comfortable XD
Any men with weapons scare her, unless she trusts them completely (obviously). But she’ll probably realize soon that no one’s going to hurt her.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Though, she’d probably also want to help since she hates the queen.
From Ellis’s perspective, that’s what it was, basically. He could tell that she was scared of him at first, but he has no idea why. If he knew what she had been thinking, he might be a bit more sympathetic, or he might just be annoyed that she assumed bad things about him…
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