Linus Smallprint

Or is it basically the real world but different names? Sorry if this sounds confusing.

Yes. It is. So, the Empire is a cross of Germany and Rome. Ardenta is kind of Spanish/Irish, and Vendalia is Briton/Saxony.

I crossed landscapes with customs and people groups. So yes, it’s basically the real world. You could say it’s just a country we…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

And here’s Riker!

@grcr

Here’s your character!! I hope you like her!

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr

hello, for anyone who’s been reading the scenes I’ve been posting, here’s another Jonathan/Jim interaction. Jonathan is now 15, making Jim 27.

It was late one evening. Jonathan sat on his mattress and watched Jim, who was shaving with…

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@kyronthearcanin

That’s awesome, congrats!

@whalekeeper

Haha! Those are so cute! lol.

I call next place after Mineralizedwritings

@rae

It was really good! I liked the scene a lot. I would really like to see the previous scene where the fight/killing happened. It would help straighten out the dialogue. You see, Misty thinks Tenz is wrong, Tenz thinks he;’s right. Roan, (who I don’t think saw much) is loyally siding with his sister. However, we don’t have the actual facts. It…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*throwing a fit because I want more!!!!!*

ahhhhhhhhh!!!!! SOOOOOOO GOOOOOD!!!! I love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thanks. I’ll see what I can do.

@theshadow

Here is the next section.

“Aaron! Aaron, wait up!”

Aaron turned and saw his friend running down the road to catch up with him. “Hello Peter.”

“Aaron, what on earth is going on?” demanded Peter.

“What do you mean?” asked Aaron, leaning against the fence that ran next to the road.

“You,” exclaimed Peter. “You’ve been acting…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Got it.

No problem about the name. I just copy and paste everyone’s tags. otherwise I would never get it right. haha.

@theshadow

Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world?

Oh, a fictional world. I thought that was clear with the country names. It’s a fictional world, but the story could have taken place in the real world. (i.e. not fantasy or something like that)

Aaron is 18. Did I not say that? I did in the first draft. whoops.

@theshadow

Oh that is totally fine. Me being an author, I starting wondering if something had happened to you, and I was hoping that you were ok. lol. I need to quit thinking the worst! haha! Just wait until time allows. Hope you had a fun time at the Lake!

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseiforgot

Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]

@grcr

Ok. Note excluded. haha! I am so helpless when it comes to stuff like this. lololol.

@grcr

One last question from non-fashion me.

Is pink Korean aesthetic makeup? Right? It’s eyeshadow? Or am I completely not knowing what I’m talking about. (Guess who doesn’t ever where makeup either……..)

@grcr

Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)

Anyhow, thanks for the…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, and do you want the swastika armband? I’ve seen death squad uniforms with and without.

@freed_and_redeemed

Now THIS style I know. lol. Ok, I take it back, I am a fashion girl. an OLDfashion one. lol.

Of course I’ll do this!!! I was hoping you would ask me to do Riker!!!!
(I am still going nuts wanting to read more about them all!)

Yes! Of course I’ll do black and white.

If GRCR doesn’t reply by this afternoon I might have to…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha