Linus Smallprint

because, Sara, he is clearly evil. I never like the badguys, and the misunderstood villains are the LITERAL WORST so that better not be what he is. Whatever sad background he might have, that is NO excuse for him being evil, which he clearly is.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.

Only critique would be this line.

looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith

It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!

Also, how old are the kids now?

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago

Aaron….

BAD IDEA 😬😬😬

my guy you’re gonna get yourself killed :/

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Okay. As long as you don’t hate him haha 😂😂😂

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

Aww thanks girl <333

What’s your favorite one so far? (Or character or scene)

HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

@savannah_grace2009
These past chapters have been really good!

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

BUT WHY DO YOU HATE HANS

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

I don’t hate Hans, I’m just pretty much indifferent on the subject.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

yeah, go ahead and call backup. You’re gonna need it.

High five!

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago

Tags: @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr (CASSIAN SCENE ALERT)

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

This looks interesting. what is it? can I join y’all?

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

girl you have no idea…

I’m calling in backup.

@RAE HELP ME THEY ARE ATTACKING OUR POOR HANS 😭😭😭😭

I’m choosing to ignore that offensive statement 😢😢😔

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Except the people who don’t love him.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

EVERYBODY LOVES HANS <3

I don’t think so.

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Again…

HANS IS MY POOR BABYYYYY

EVERYBODY LOVES HANS <3

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Ok, whatever. I guess I’ll just try to deal wh=ith it. It’s been doing since I started being on here.

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009

I can say what I like, thank you very much. It is America after all.

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago

Next section!!

It was nearly dark when the two rose to head back to the house. Turin laid a hand on Aaron’s shoulder. “Aaron, I am sorry,” he said.

“What for?” asked Aaron.

“For the way I have treated you and encouraged Sabina to treat you. We were both wrong, and I am most to blame,” s…[Read more]

HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

Yep.

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago

@highscribeofatherium

I haven’t seen it eat any posts recently, have you? Not since Kathleen banished Wyoh from KP.

Yeah, me neither.

Good riddance XD

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago