Linus Smallprint

@freed_and_redeemed

*screams with joy*

I LOVE seeing you aesthetics!!!!!! YIPPY!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

YAY!!! Ooo, it was so good!!!

Hey, did you get some ideas for this scene from the brainstorming we did? (Him yelling at Lily and all?)

I love the dynamics, and I can’t wait to see how they got from hating each other to this. (Well, i guess Riker never hated Leon, but, you know.)

Anyhow! Awesome job! And, i think you writing…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Seems right up your ally.

lol.

@raxforge

I’m not saying you should take death lightly. In fact, i dislike it when stories/books do. But i also don’t think it needs to be taken as dark and full of despair, because that is not a Christian worldview.

I don’t know where you got the idea that my prompt meant I wanted you to take death lightly. Sorry if there was some…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You said ‘need’ a lot, does that mean you would only talk about death if you need to, not at any other time?

Yes.

And what time in a story would you believe it is a necessary time?

When a character does die. Characters die, there is no doubt about. Sometimes you need a character to die to improve another character’s ark. I’m just say…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

As soon as Flare realized he was on the ground, he was up again ready to fight. Ben was a little slower but got up quickly. All the Ironwalkers were still on the ground, but they started to get up.

“Quick, back to the roof.” T…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks 👍

@whalekeeper

So you wouldn’t write about death in any circumstance because it might offend people?

Not necessarily, it is okay to write about death in some senses, but in this case, I can’t see anything good coming from writing about death right now. If I need to offend people, I will. But I don’t see a need.

Do you find it unlikable to t…

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A conversation over text between me and @rae

Me: Ruth

Me: Ruth

Me: Ruth

Me: Ruth

Me: Ruth

Ruth: What is it?! What’s wrong?!

Me: Life or death question

Ruth: What?

Me: Do you want me to keep the sideburns or get rid of them?

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

Flare looked down from the roof top at the kid who just became unconscious as Ironwalkers surrounded him. He drew his sword.

“Flare don’t-” Ben didn’t finish his sentence when Flare jumped down. When he landed, he ran towards the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I have decided not to participate this time around. My belief is that death should not be taken lightly. I cannot write about death that might make others feel uncomfortable or offended. I know people who have dealt with people dying and have seen them dying. That is something that that person has to deal with the rest of their…[Read more]

@keilah-h

HAHA!

I actually love some of the tron soundtrack!!! Some of it I can’t stand, but this song and a few others I really love!

Here, you should listen to this song. Honestly, the whole soundtrack is great!

@keilah-h

Glad that makes sense. Some people have thought I was a little crazy for adding that and shouldn’t be playing around with adding demonic powers to my books. But we LIVE IN A WORLD with demonic powers people. *sigh* Glad this makes sense to someone.

From the way Linus asked the question I’m wondering what his response will be.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oooooo!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!!! Ahhhhhh!!!! I’m so excited!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint

(Though I guess Darrien might be panicked.)

Yeah, he’s panicked. He has no idea who Julian is, so the only reason that seems reasonable for a soldier to be here is to arrest those who were hiding him.

Again, another lie that feels wrong to me, and not just because I believe it is wrong for Christians to lie. I think it is…

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@linus-smallprint

(By the way, I should let you know that I’m not bothering to read the feedback others are giving you, so if anything has come up that you want more thought on, please let me know.)

Will do. It’s mostly the newest section from this morning that I’m anxious about, because the dynamics are delicate. as you will see. And I’m i…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.)

How dare you question my wise and perfect choice of exclamation marks! I have perfect contr…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 

Wooph! Got a lot to catch up on! Let’s see how far I get before I have class…

Yeah. Sorry about that. I kinda went on an editing streak and hybridlore was encouraging it. lol.

In the part where he is watching Arron in the fountain, he puts an end to it, and I was saying he was harsh based of of that. But I forgot tha…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

NEXT SECTION!!

Joseph sat at the table staring at nothing.

In the corner, Sabina was holding a sobbing Eric, and Asher was sitting beside Noah, his face pressed against him. Alicia was at the other end of the table, her hands over her face.

Darrien had a hand on Joseph’s shoulder…

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@hybridlore

I just saw this and thought of you.