@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I feel like I’m bad at explaining this…. is it making sense? Or am I just making the world more confusing at the moment….. XD
I think I get what you are saying. Christians should rebel and take on the government if it is the only means to protect their families. That was also an argument in your friend’s essay on violence: Fathe…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Very sorry for not replying soon. Work picked up again, and I’ve been wasting the free time I have.
Wow!! That was fast!
Heh heh. I had a lot of free time to read during long drives.
I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I t…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay. Maybe I will wait a bit and give you some more time to get through to them.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Rock music in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Instead of giving you a direct answer, I am going to give you a few things to think through from both sides of the argument.
I don’t believe that just because something has been invented by a Godless person does not mean it is wrong. Consider this: If we take a look at the book of Genesis, it was Jubal who invented instruments.…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, I’m back from vacation and I have finished your book!
Sorry for the lack of comments. Often, while I was reading it, I didn’t even have Wi-fi or Data, so most of my feedback will be my answers to your questions I found on page 15 of this forum.
Overall, it was an exciting story with interesting characters. I can see why…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 6 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeepe @hybridlore @keilah-h @esther-c
I would stay away from things like WIX. I can’t remember what it was, but while they are easier to make, there were reasons my instructors gave me to avoid these. Security might have been one of them. (Then again, Kingdom Pen isn’t. Because of my knowledge of WordPress, I was able to find an admin login…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
You’re welcome!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago

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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
Alrighty!
Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
I found Jim’s. I also have seen Jonathan, 314, and two people I have yet to meet: Amber and Michael.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?
And Jim too?

…but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint posted a new activity comment 7 months ago
Thank you for the welcome!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
I have finished The Color of Hope and quite enjoyed it. I’ve been quite busy with work lately, and am going on vacation right away. I will get to answering your feedback questions when I get back!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
All right, sounds good. I have made it to Chapter 10 so far today. I may read more later if I have time.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
That works! I’m in. Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
Hey Ellette, I just tried clicking on the link to the Microsoft Word document that you posted early on in this forum, but it told me I didn’t have permission. Is that the correct link? I can email you my Microsoft Email address if you need it so you can add me in.
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Linus Smallprint posted a new activity comment 7 months, 1 week ago
Don’t worry, I will return to reading TCoH. The thing that was causing me to stumble is something that usually only appears in fantasy books. Science fiction is the only other genre I know of it could appear in. Your book is fine. There was nothing of that sort in it, so I will pick it up again and continue reading.
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Linus Smallprint posted a new activity comment 7 months, 1 week ago
Thank you for understanding! I will try to get to checking out your Mission Impossible tomorrow!
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Oh that would be great! Thanks you!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
I don’t know if you saw it or not, but I am back! I will try to get to reading and critiquing part three of The Color of Hope tommorow!
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Glad to hear! Looking forward to reading your feedback!