Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

You used “whipped” instead of “wiped”

Not the first time I’ve done that. Alan has had his memory whipped by before (which I guess means he was whipped until he forgot what he was supposed to? I don’t know), but as my friend said when he noticed that, “when there’s a whip, there’s a way.”

So, you have the next one?

I am going t…[Read more]

Some tags decided not to work again. Let’s try that once more:
@keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

Next chapter. As Ellette predicted, things start to get messy here.

Chapter the 10th: (https://editor.reedsy.com/s/T1bLc1N/c/ZqPt_58SO73q86vE/chapter-the-10th)

@ellette-giselle

That’s all I have on that……..

Okay, thank you. That is helpful.

NICE! I will pester you if I do not wake up to the next chapter tomorrow.

Excellent!

@keilah-h

Sorry, forgot the tag

Google Photos link to my drawing. If you like it, make sure to save it, because I am going to take this link down after you are done judging. (https://photos.app.goo.gl/6yjohfkDfwKhGxAw6)

@ellette-giselle

I like how Sabina asks to be baptized without lots of people asking. I know the idea of being baptized in front of everyone scares some new believers, especially teens. I also like to see the variety of personalities in different characters as they become Christians.

Prediction: Something dangerous is just around the corner.

@ellette-giselle

Phew! That’s a lot about horses. I think I will grab everything you said about them and save it in a document for future reference. In case you could not tell, Martha likes horses and would definitely know all of this, so in order to have her talk about it, I will need to know it. Thank you for typing this all out! Is this the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well, I actually kinda got hesitant about sharing it because I might have lost confidence in it being any good at all…….. I felt like the whole point of the story was being lost because of the other places that I was falling short. Do you think that’s true?

I have more to submit if you want me to.

I think you should keep on shari…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

(You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Heh heh. I’ll try.

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite good.

Thank you!

Fairly well. What I’m getting is that the dear instict makes them run….. but why would it not do that to archers. I would think being an archer would…

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Also, this may give you the option to join this album. I tried to turn that off. Please ignore that and do not add any images.

I will add illustrations of all the non-human races I have created as well.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @savannah_grace2009 (I know you are taking a break from Kingdome Pen, Sara, so I will just tag you this final time until you return)

Since Wyoh or whatever we are calling the creature that is currently devouring images is on the loose, I will share images of my characters through other…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for the detailed feedback! I has good grammers, eh?

spinach? Oh man, I am laughing so hard! I mean, what a way to start a story after that prologue! You have defiantly got me hooked, just because I can’t imagine where you are going with spinach! Haha! You obviously have a good sense of humor!
Ok, I’ll keep rea…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Hmmm, so the girl is a soldier? I personally don’t like women in battle. It’s ugly. I have plenty more thoughts on that….. but i won’t make you listen to them. lol. This is more of a personal complaint/thought, not an edit.

Seems I have hit a controversial topic here. This is something that my brother has given me grie…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Let’s try this again. Had lots of glitching last time.

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Yes please, I would love to see your notes!

As to the questions I had earli…[Read more]

Did I break this page? Anything beyond page 2 keeps on refreshing itself before it can load. Remind me not to make anymore custom HTML and CSS buttons. I wounder if another post will fix this.

Also, what do you think about a child being the only one to believe and step forward in that whole crowd?

This is interesting. This could result in others thinking that Aaron’s beliefs are childish. (I am trying to imagine Turin’s reaction to this, but he could also be dismissed for being a young man.)

@keilah-h

Wyoh is back? Both Highscribe and GRCR’s images are returning 404s when I try to investigate, so yes, there is an error with images being uploaded from the site. Hmm. I will find a way to get my artwork to you through a link once it is one. I may just upload it to Google Drive.

I wounder if the problem is that there is simply too much…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Here is my forum for TNPT. Please look back through it the questions I have for my readers. You mentioned you have some predictions. (“haha! I rock and guessing scenes! lolololol”) If you do, I would not mind hearing those as well, but #no-spoilers.

Just so you know, I am trying to post at least one chapter a week. I find…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, got to the latest section. So the gospel finally got through to Sabina. Not very surprised, but happy to see it. I’m smiling right now.