Linus Smallprint

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle

Stepping in here about your conversation about the character’s ages. I do imagine Aaron as around 18 years of age. Similar to you, Ellette, in my church 18-year-olds do get married and do show maturity. There is one who Aaron kind of reminds me of who is a year younger than me, being 20 years old, but I feel…[Read more]

@keilah-h

So apparently Sara and I have inspired you to make some more fantasy creatures? I would be curious to know what they are.

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I’ve got to work on that :/

Well, that’s the whole point of making several drafts. Each one you can learn from and improve on the next. One of my drafts for TNPT was confusing like this as well. You will figure this out, don’t let the fact it is confusing right now discourage you. Your story is showing potential, e…[Read more]

You guys make playlists for your characters? Huh, maybe I should try that (though there is no way I can promise that most of them will not be JRPG VGM OSTs)

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for sharing, I will listen through this.

YUCK!!! You sir, do not pay attention to descriptions!!!! A full beard! UGH! No! He’s nineteen or twenty!

If you think that’s bad, wait until you hear how I butcher the pronunciation of names! (Although I think I can pronounce your characters’ names fine. If I butcher ‘Aaron’, you have reason to worry.)

Yeah, I think I may be minorly dyslexic. W…[Read more]

Chapter the 9th is in there as well, but is not finished. I will let everyone know when it is done.

All right, here is the updated link will all the chapters:

The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book I: The Cost

@loopylin @stephie @savannah_grace2009

All right. Thank you for confirming your interest. You know, maybe I will remove the deadlines from chapters, giving you more time to read it. (Don’t ask why I had those in the first place, I’m not entirely sure myself.) I also might do what you do, Sara, putting the link to my project in my status update. I…[Read more]

Ack, messed up your tag again @loopylin

For some reason, some of those tags did not work. Let’s try that again.

@keilah-h, @stephie, @looplin, @theshadow

@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow

Finished early this week. I might be able to get Chapter the 9th to you soon as well.

If any of you are gardeners/farmers and have experience in dealing with pesty bugs, I would like to know what you think of how this problem is dealt with in this chapter. How realistic are the sol…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I am laughing right now, mostly because I relate to drawing a character, looking back on it, and realizing how awful it looks. Yup, I’ve been there before. If it makes you feel better, I was imagining Turin looking even older for whatever reason, perhaps in his forties despite the fact you mentioned he was a young man. I also…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I have read everything you have in the link you posted on your profile. (Up to Chapter 16. Double checking, that is everything you have posted so far, right?)

I was a bit confused at the beginning. Until Sef’s Mani became pregnant, I could not figure out the story’s plot. I first thought this story would be all about Lilitu…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I read the latest part, I don’t have much to say about it, sorry. (Through if there is anything specific you would like to ask us about, I will probably have something to say.)

Nice illustration of Sabina. She looks a little more European than I was expecting, but I guess from what you have said about her country, that makes…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Haha, I guess there’s no way to know who has the smallest handwriting, but we both win that title in our respective irl social circles.

Ha ha! Okay