Linus Smallprint

@loopylin

I was thinking landfill

But what about “Remember to always recycle kids!”

(Asuming your characters are kids of course)

@whalekeeper

Hey, nice website! I love how you incorporated your drawings into that section about personal values.

Thank you. The instructor of my portfolio course pushed us to make our websites stand out by showing we were more than just coders.

That would be amazing. There has to be some way to contact them about this properly.

I’ve tried…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Well goodbye and hello then.

Also was that you on the website?!

Yup, that’s me. Sorry, in my third year of college now. I am currently 21. That picture was taken when I was 20. I look younger than I am.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay. Revising is fine, I have a lot of changes between my first and second draft of TNPT. I will continue reading then. Reading the second chapter, I see it is a scene you had in your previous draft now. I’ll get back to you when I have more thoughts.

@loopylin

Recycle. Definatly recycle. I don’t know much about these characters, but recycling is the best option by far.

@the_lost-journal

There is crimsoninkmedia.com, a website run by a gentleman in my church. However, this is less of a website for Christian authors to connect and more for sharing your work. I also don’t know if he intends to open it up to people he doesn’t know personally. I also don’t know how well he is maintaining the website right now. He…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Started reading through your book, but have some confusion. I had started to read something you were working on around August and September last year before you decided to take a break. Is this the sequel you are working on now? Could I get the link to finish the first book please before I read the next?

I noticed you have…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sure, I can. I’m taking a break from my own WIP, so I definitely have some time to read through it. The link is the one on your profile page?

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I forgot about your question regarding a book that turns into a fantasy book part way through.

I haven’t read A Series of Unfortunate Events, but I have read some other books where reality becomes fantasy. Here are some ideas for you for your foreshadowing:

• Fantasy Ideas: Maybe you could have some things like one character…

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@the_lost-journal

So what chapter are you on right now? 

TNPT: The Cost is now finished. 34 chapters + a prologue and discussion questions. I’m just getting feedback for now before I start working on Book II.

Also how are you so brave?! I would be so scared that people would judge my writing. That’s why I stoped with the short story I was sh…

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@theshadow

Sorry, just saw this now. I haven’t been able to read it for a bit with school picking up now. Sorry, hopefully at some point I’ll catch up.

That’s okay. If your too busy don’t feel like you have to read this. Thank you for letting me know where you are.

@loopylin

Reading it right now! Sorry, I’ve gotten behind. I’ll let you know my thoughts once I’m done :]

Awesome! Thank you!

Don’t know if I’ve said this before, but the way Lyens name everything is hilarious XD

Sometimes, limits bring out creativity. I was struggling to come up with names for them, other than the names I am currently using, so…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you very much for your feedback!

Research the cultures you’re using for your creatures as much as you’re comfortable with.

Good idea. Thanks!

It drives me crazy when authors put huge cliffhangers in the ends of their books and then we have to wait 2 years for the next one. (looking at you, Keeper of the Lost Cities….)

Two years?…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

How long do you want before I start posting the next book?

A month should be fine. But if you want to start posting earlier, that is also fine; I will catch up when I am ready.

@ellette-giselle

Okay👍

(Also, apparently I am not allowed to just post a thumbs-up emoji with your tag, because I have already done that. Weird)

@ellette-giselle

Just wondering. Do you have a cover for this book yet?

@keilah-h

I will just make things easy for you and give you a new link to the feedback file.

TNPT: The Cost – Second Draft Feedback

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

If you’re talking about CWW, no problem, it’s an optional challenge. :] You should tell your sister, though, that nobody actually shares their stories on the community. You only count up your words and submit the number each time you write. So her project wouldn’t be shown to anyone.

Yes, I did mean the crazy writing week. I don’t…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig @whalekeeper

I looked at this and showed my sister, but I don’t think either of us will be doing it this year. My sister doesn’t feel ready to share the project she is typing up and her WIP she is writing on paper. I would also like to take a break from writing and focus on some other things.

@loopylin and @theshadow

Just wondering if either of you are still reading through TNPT: The Cost.