Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

Let’s try this again. Had lots of glitching last time.

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Yes please, I would love to see your notes!

As to the questions I had earli…[Read more]

Did I break this page? Anything beyond page 2 keeps on refreshing itself before it can load. Remind me not to make anymore custom HTML and CSS buttons. I wounder if another post will fix this.

Also, what do you think about a child being the only one to believe and step forward in that whole crowd?

This is interesting. This could result in others thinking that Aaron’s beliefs are childish. (I am trying to imagine Turin’s reaction to this, but he could also be dismissed for being a young man.)

@keilah-h

Wyoh is back? Both Highscribe and GRCR’s images are returning 404s when I try to investigate, so yes, there is an error with images being uploaded from the site. Hmm. I will find a way to get my artwork to you through a link once it is one. I may just upload it to Google Drive.

I wounder if the problem is that there is simply too much…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Here is my forum for TNPT. Please look back through it the questions I have for my readers. You mentioned you have some predictions. (“haha! I rock and guessing scenes! lolololol”) If you do, I would not mind hearing those as well, but #no-spoilers.

Just so you know, I am trying to post at least one chapter a week. I find…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, got to the latest section. So the gospel finally got through to Sabina. Not very surprised, but happy to see it. I’m smiling right now.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. Any ideas? – Ellette

The girls in…

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@ellette-giselle

Sorry for the late response. I was away on a day trip to the mountains on Saturday and I usually try to avoid going on my laptop on Sundays (also, it was my sister’s birthday, so wanted to celebrate that with her and the rest of my family)

  I was literally just snooping around on your profile and discovered you had a story! I w…

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@ellette-giselle

By the way, would you mind if I recruited you to read/give feedback on my project? It is a fantasy story set in a world that is similar in some ways to the Wingfeather world. If you don’t want to or don’t have the time, that is all right.

@ellette-giselle

Aaron looks like he’s kind of mischievous. Thanks for sharing these!

@ellette-giselle

Ugh. It ate my response. I’m going to cry and give up! I can’t do this anymore!

Try breaking it up into smaller sections next time. You don’t have to answer everyone’s comment in one go. It might be a bit too much for the server to process properly.

arrrrrrrrgh!!!! But I think it’s moving TOO SLOW!!! All of that is just setti…

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@ellette-giselle

One more thing I think you can use to further develop Aaron. You introduced him as someone who gets lost thought to the point where his teacher asks him to come back to the real world. How does this benefit and hinder him later on in the story?

@ellette-giselle

@linus-smallprint You are my only hope!

I felt a great disturbance in the Force, as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror (some were probably named Aaron) and were suddenly silenced. – Obi-wan Kenobi (bit in parenthesis added)

Okay, I have thought through more of what Sara and Whaley have been saying. I’m sorry to…[Read more]

@loopylin @stephie @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter the 9th is ready to read!
 
The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book I: The Cost
 

@ellette-giselle

I’m going to read that last part later. I need to go out and buy my sister a birthday present whale she is at work.

@savannah_grace2009

You’re welcome. I’m encouraged to hear you found that encouraging.

I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I have plenty of time to get better!!!

I should let you know I was horrible at writing until…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009, @ellette-giselle

Okay, I’m going to try this ‘Create a Playlist for Your Story’ thing, but I am going to need to think about it first. Also, I have one question, what does ‘Main Ship’ mean? Is this something to do with romance (I’m guessing that ship is short for relationship)? The first book in my series does not have any…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks for sharing! Are any of these races explicitly good or bad? With this new list, I think I like Drachenheul best. (I am kink of biased towards wolves.)

Do you have some new story you are planning with all of this?

Humans—You know these.

You sure about that?

Also, out of curiosity, why do you always give them human heads?

Wait, you’re twenty? Or did I just completely misunderstand that.

I’m 21. The other guy is 20.

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you for the list. So your creatures are humans with different skin/hair colour and that colour relates to powers they have. So are Eloy and Cassian half-brothers then?

Pythonos demonstrate how we can’t break free from Satan’s power unless Jesus helps us to see the lies we believe and we resist the devil, like the ver…

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