@lightoverdarkness6
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 4 hours ago
I’ve read this before…………. maybe in the snowball fight?
Yep. This is the same, it just has the ending now.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 4 hours ago
first off, I want a copy of your pfp!!!
Okay
Also, do you like coffee? Because I have a funny black cat one for coffee (pinterest is my friend)
Second, I find bad eating habits common among Authors. I think it’s because we get so lost in our book worlds that we forget about the real world.
Yeah…I can relate to t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 4 hours ago
I’ve read this before…………. maybe in the snowball fight?
Really, really good! I’m liking this a lot!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
I’m sorry….. what?!?!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 4 hours ago
@raxforge (because this short story has changed a little since you last read it) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Fifth story!
(not sure if I like the title, but it’ll do)
A Scar Hidden by a Scarf
Cold. Freezing cold.Baron’s teeth chattered as he hugged himself, pulling his thin leather jacket closer around his body. His b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 4 hours ago
first off, I want a copy of your pfp!!!
Second, I find bad eating habits common among Authors. I think it’s because we get so lost in our book worlds that we forget about the real world.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 4 hours ago
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
pretty much same for me usually, except the past few days. Mom and Dad have recently kept a stock of my favorite cereal so I now have incentive to eat breakfast, so recently I’ve skipped lunch.
And I just realized as I said that that I haven’t eaten anything…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 6 hours ago
both! Honestly your own drawings are getting better and better!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 6 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
same. I think There are only a few sane people still left on KP who haven’t done that.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
sounds good!
I think I’m gonna bust Rory’s knee. I need to do something with the pain that I’m in. -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 7 hours ago
oh my goodness! That video!
I. Just. Died.
we are in the coldest snap of the century in our state….. or so they say….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
do you want to go again or are we waiting for @whalekeeper ?
I think for the moment this is more of a Rory/Leo conversation…. but if you think she should RP next that’s fine.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
oh yes!!! Much better! That makes far more sense.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 7 hours ago
haha!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
It’s not so much the words as Onnendel’s reaction. Or the way it was written. If yoy could do this:
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him.”
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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