@lightoverdarkness6
Active 6 days, 14 hours ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
In Which Orcs Stink, and Dwogin Plays Hockey
Chapter 6
“Cowards and kettledrums!” Dwogin bellowed. His axe sprang into his hand and the stout warrior went charging into the first line of the ambushment. Orcs flew like flies over a hotly contested piece of garbage. I gagged.
In the chaos that ensued, I caught a glimpse of Onnendel and Tra…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
nope, I have two brothers and 1 sister.
I honestly think that it’s not good to have that big of a congregation. We’re called to fellowship with the believers and uplift, encourage, and hold one another accountable. I find that hard to do when you don’t know the people in your church. *shrug* that’s just my opinion.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
Good, I’m glad you understand what I mean.
oh I think we have about………… 100 kids and young adults and maybe 25 parents. (our family of 6 is the smallest family in the church. the average is about nine kids,)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
YAY!!!!! I was literally just thinking about this!
Rory
Rory lowered his gaze. “You’ve seen me fight. I’m skilled. And that’s without a weapon. Give me a gun or a knife………” he shrugged. “They trained me well. I’m skilled and I’m dangerous. They want me to continue to fight for them, to train other to be like me…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
Ooooooo!!! CHILLS! I love it so much!!!! I sense a redemption story and those are my favorite!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
yeah, my poor characters are about to all receive knee injuries…………………
Thank you for the prayers!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
BTW how’s that drawing of Soldier going?
I wasn’t able to print the reference pictures until this morning. Currently, I’m thinking over posing.
My brother took the pictures and asked what it was. He had a good laugh over Soldier’s grin as he teleports bread lol. I’m gonna try to get him to read your fanfic, I think he’d like it a lot.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle Here you go.
@keilah-h @highcribeofaethum
Fourth story!
Brutus
I am a hideous monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged and had purpose. That I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in. I had to prove to him…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
*excited clapping*
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
I guess I have a magic system, but it’s more a power system. In my KoS/Shattered Kingdoms series, there are unseen powers behind almost everything. Influences from the races of the Lighted and the Faded on the race of Blood. (Made the names up on the spot. XD) It’s pretty obviously allegorical, but I’m having fun developing it as if it’s not so I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
Oh yeah, this is also a great article: https://booklaurie.com/blog/the-psychology-of-creating-characters/
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
thank you so much, rae!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
thanks. I really hope so too. we have a two day drive coming up and it’ll be horrible if I’m still this bad off.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
I’ll be praying for you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Thanks. ❤️
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
I was carrying thing to the car and slipped on the ice. My hands were full so I caught myself on my knee against the cement and possibly knocked myself out. I was at least stunned, and my head was against the sidewalk and snow. It’s possibly cracked or I may have torn something. It just hurts so, so bad. I’ve also been randomly falling…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
I’ll try, but I’m pretty badly injured right now so we’ll see if I’m conscious and able to make my brain work.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
I totally agree with both of you about the race thing they’re teaching in schools. I honestly think we were fine where we are today. I never say black people looked down on in America in my lifetime. But now they’re just stirring up old quarrels. And, if the white people are the badguys and need to build up black people, t…[Read more]
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