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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
(I’m only gone foe a few days, and suddenly people are changing their usernames and profile pictures all at once. How am I supposed to know who’s who anymore?)
You look at tags. Those never change.
I think I’m partly to blame for this. I changed my name to a silly nickname of mine, then Andrew changed his, and then other peo…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
Your senses were correct! This is a redemption story.
Small note on the next story, it was originally began for the short story prompt “a story of a scar” but never finished as such for it sparked the entire Baron Chronicles actually being written, and the story behind Baron’s scar has already been revealed so I had to…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Wow, name-changing is becoming a tread.
Tsk, tsk. No self-deprecation allowed on this topic.
Now you sound like Andrew lol
Does Chase have the element of Creatures? After all, he is the ultimate ✨Disney Princess✨!
I have that meme saved somewhere…
Yes, he’s actually the reason that element came to be. He’s also the reason I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Apparently my feet changed that, which meant my story was changing itself. A terrifying thought indeed.
Dun … dun… DUN!!! XD
Nice segment. Interested to see where it goes next…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Okay everyone, I’m gonna share some of the races in my world!
Aquinos:
Aquinos have blue skin, hair, and eyes. They have the power to pull moisture out of the air and manipulate it. If there is no moisture in the air, they are helpless. They also tend to be easily dehydrated if they’ve used their power too much, but most of the time they c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME TOOOO
YOU’RE NOT A POTATO ANYMORE
*brain explodes*
I LOVE IT
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
I LOVE IT
You can still share those, since I would classify fantastical powers/abilities as magic on this topic. Basically we’re here to talk about any fantastical abilities, technically magic in-story or not. XD
Okay perfect!
I’m still fleshing those out a little as to why and how their powers w…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Also….
Why would Onnendel be sending orcs to hunt his own band? And then give himself away by a notable device on his minions’ uniforms?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
What? XD Oh no. I’ll tweak that. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun.
Onnendel is not the traitor. It would be a great twist, but he’s too much of Aenwest’s cinnamon roll to have a negative arc..
Plus… Backstory. Lots of backstory….
They’ll talk more about that in the next two chapters.
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Aaand I’ll reply to everyone else, but I have to go. *Poofs away*
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
That type of randomness must be preserved.
I agree. You can definitely keep that vibe and just make up the rules for yourself so you stay consistent. You wouldn’t have to tell anyone the rules of the system.
It seems like your magic comes from fantastical animals. I don’t know if that’s true, but I do think that would be a great source of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
or you could gather the kids and play a game with them. I used to do that all the time when they were younger.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
yeah, well have you tried talking with the women, or even sitting and listening to the adults talk?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
wait what!!!!???
I keep re-reading this, but it reads as if they’re saying Onnendel is the traitor. He’s not, RIGHT?!?!?!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
I just died.
hahahaha!!! That’s so, so good!
You should come down and visit ours! lololol.
The politics are way better and we’re pretty big too…. and we have an army. (I’m referring to the song…… haha!)
I don’t have anyone my age, but I take time to invest in the lives of the little girls…[Read more]
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whaley's profile was updated 1 week, 3 days ago
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