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@whalekeeper    @highscribeofaetherium    @keilah-h     @linus-smallprint

So, about watching 1 a day…………

I finished them all. WHAT CLIFF HANGER!

Dude, I am so showing these to my brothers.

Dude, I so wasted over an hour of writing time.

Dude.

@highscribeofaetherium

Skitters away chaotically

AAHH GUYS

Look. I would watch them anyway to make my guy friend smile, so it’s a win-win for everybody. *Holds out hand to shake on it* I’ll watch em

I still haven’t watched Alan Becker, but one of my best friends has always been obsessed and I should watch them for the sake of making him happy. XD I have no doubt they’re good.

@keilah-h   @highscribeofaetherium

Haha! Sounds great.

@keilah-h

Really into it now.

I gotta watch one. But I’ve got to make sure it’s like only one a day, otherwise I’ll be stuck.

@keilah-h

OOOooooo!!! I am SOLD!

I love tragic stories!

@linus-smallprint

wait what.

There’s a story?

@linus-smallprint

OH MY WORD!!

I finally caved and tried the Mercinary Tryouts one!!

Ahahahahahaha!!!! lololololololololololol!!!!

So funny!!!

🤣

I could get stuck watching those for hours.

Not responsible so I won’t.

@liberty

Love that song btw!

Love Grey Havens.

@linus-smallprint

Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣

@linus-smallprint

I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!

The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.

Bruuuhhh

@rae

I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]

@keilah-h

I was mostly joking.

I know, but my questions came from my own head. XD

@linus-smallprint

Dude. Ai has been asking me these questions!

*stares in horror*

😂

Of course let me know. I’d love to help with the third book! Just let me know. Maybe while you’re on your online break you can draw a bunch of illustrations! *hint hint* 🙃

@hybridlore

Thank you! I know, I was thinking the same thing when I looked it over again. 😂

Glad it feels realistic. I kept breaking his character here in the other drafts, so I’m really working on taking it more slowly. (Even if it makes me want to shake some sense into him!)

First, how would they get Jonathan back into the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 
~FEEDBACK~
The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

@rae

I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)

For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)

Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)

Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)

And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)

Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]