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@rae

Ah! Happy Birthday!! I’m so glad you had a blast! It sounds like a fun day.

That cheesecake place looks amazing. Now I want to go to Connecticut. XD

I should say spring. Where I am, you really only get an extended autumn and then switch right back to summer, so May just feels like summer.

@keilah-h

That’s what I was getting at. XD They have Christmas stuff even in early summer.

@theducktator

*Slides in* Do you go to Hobby Lobby often?

@loopylin

Hey, would you still be up for doing this in the next month or so? I realize I never got around to writing/sending you a story.

I was writing one that would go in the “Appendix” for Portals: When My Story Ate Me. I just didn’t feel like it was really coming home. I realize now that I rely a bit too much on the reader’s ability to read…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a way to do it. XD There’s some neat stuff in there.

Sorry if I’m making this more difficult than it is…

@keilah-h

Sure 😅

@loopylin

Hmmm… *Note* I made up a mineral since I couldn’t find one that fit the description.

Viktor

A little sister problem then. Viktor squinted though his dusty goggles at his partner. He wouldn’t want to pry, but Lois had been nice, friendly. He deserved the same in return.

“OK. If you want to talk about it though, I don’t mind. Maybe…[Read more]

Just lengthening your existing ones to match Huntress’s would work.

Oh wait, just lengthen them…? So they just need to be longer? I’ll try some things…

Okey-dokey. I’ll make the changes asap. I’m going to send you a separate feet test, and then I’ll rework them on him.

lol, no problem. I totally get it. 😅

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!! I literally had nothing to do for three days in the car. I read everything in the art section, everything in the general writing section. XD

@ellette-giselle

Ack! Thou snoop of the KP annals, why hast thou resurrected mine art? XD

Thank you. I’m glad you like my art. This specific piece still makes me happy, although now the mistakes seem so obvious. I won’t point them out, though. I like flattery. You’re welcome. 😉

@loopylin

This is a great question! Now I have to think… and think…

Dalton: Primary=Fight. Secondary=freeze He’s a warrior, but also a squirrel. Some things never change. This does come in handy though, since most of the others have fight pretty low down on their instincts.

Viktor: Primary=Flight. Secondary=Fight. Pretty standard. He’s…[Read more]

I don’t think I forgot anything… did I?

@keilah-h

Okay, here it is…

If there’s anything you don’t like, let me know—I can change things. 😁😁

I’m sorry about how sniper’s hat and feet turned out.

@keilah-h

Of course—I don’t mind at all!! Once I send it to you (and you like it), it’s yours to do whatever you want with! 😁

It’s actually done. I’ll post it in a couple minutes….

Now that I’m going back to the beginning…

This is really hard XD

because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.

Maybe…[Read more]

@esther-c

To be honest, I’m not really sure.

I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD

@loopylin

Their story is inspired by Chinese fantasy… so… ancient China… mixed with elements of, like, Japan and Korea… and my own crazy fascinations. Something like that. XD

Ahh ok. Yeah, like if he were cornered.